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person BrianChattillon

schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Albus is going to be FUBAR material.
No wonder Tom hates Dumbledore and the order of the phonix.

I may hate the dark tosser but doing this to him is underhanded and dishonourable!
Go Severus! Be the snarky Male dom bastard hero that you can be, Kick ass and take names and maybe Tommy Boy won't torture you. After all Tommy wouldn't tortutre a deatheater who shows his daughter the ropes and protects her from Potter and his ilk now would he... Ohhhhhh I hate to be oin Draco's Shoes as Insulting Hermoine as he does in cannon as well as toreutring her will end him in a spectacular world of crap.

I look forward to seeing where you head with this... Maybe add Tonks as Hermoines retainer(Servant) as Hermoine shags her man (Severus) Yes I am a perverted bastard but come on people. Severus does deserve SOME fucking good things in his misrable life!

I look forward to more on this as I said
Blessed be.
BrianDarksoul(Unrepentant pervert!)

person ccino49

schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Of course you should continue. And quickly please. Longer chapters too please so there is more to keep me going between updates. :):):). I'm desperate to see how she will react to this news. Once she discovers who her real father is she'll go balistic. I'm sure of it.
Hurry. Hurry.
ccino

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