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for The Pet Mistress-NEW chapter!

by HildaMalfoy

person Rose Evans
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a great story. please let me know when you update.
person Lucy
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA!
Severus Snape the minster of magic!
What an interesting idea!
In most stories, Snape seems very disinterested in power, but I've always felt like he could/is a little power hungry.
If the way he treats his students is any idication.
I'm eager to see how this new development plays out.
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start Hilda... I actually heard the sounds and was in the dungeon. I love the way you began this.
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHH! I left a review not knowing there was more. But marvellous; and hey, pretty damn good for your first fanfic.
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
agian- amazing!!

i cant wait for more!!
person wildrose
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely marvellous dark, sexy and sweet Severus all at once. Really good job! Can't wait to know were this goes.
Love
Ophelia
person Anon
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow .. he is the minister ... and why did they give her the mark ........please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person Lucy
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HA!
Professor Lucy! I kinda like that... maybe I should change my screen name.
;)
Well, you should be happy to know that I noticed no glaring grammatical errors this time!
My tutelage must be paying off.
Heh!
Also, I really liked this chapter; your lemon was pretty damn nice.
Though it kind of weirded me out that they were just in the dungeons... with other people I assume.
Also, I thought Hermione was a little OOC. I would have expected her to be a little more confused or angry or at least a little inquisitive.
But all in all good chapter (nice and long eh?)
Keep it up!
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good start. Can't wait til you write more.