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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are doing a fine job. Good luck in your classes, try to update
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I am enjoying this. Your grasp of the english language in it's written form is far better than some peoples I've seen. I hope you continue on this lovely fic.
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great work. Update soon please!
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more.
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow .. now mione know that he does not think of her as a slave and that no one is to touch her but him ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
angel
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really looking forward to the next chapter. I always picture the 'good' side winning and while slavery is abhorrent it seems to me that Severus is more Hermione's slave, he just doesn't know it yet.
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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story! Are you from Latvia? The reason I ask is I noticed the .lv on your email address. I'm an American of Latvian heritage so it caught my eye. I look forward to reading more!
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
agian-
this is an AMAZING story.
i am awaiting the next chapter.
this story is going to be amazing if you keep on writing like this.
can't wait till the next part!!!
this is an AMAZING story.
i am awaiting the next chapter.
this story is going to be amazing if you keep on writing like this.
can't wait till the next part!!!
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
The premise of your story is fine. I just want to know - is English your first language? It is difficult to read if when grammar is so disjointed, but I can forgive if you aren't a native speaker.
The premise of your story is fine. I just want to know - is English your first language? It is difficult to read if when grammar is so disjointed, but I can forgive if you aren't a native speaker.
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story!! Some new twists, I love it! Can't wait for more, keep up the good work
~K
~K