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for The Pet Mistress-NEW chapter!

by HildaMalfoy

schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a beta, but I can tell you that in the title, it is Mistress, not misstress. Now is Severus going to take advantage of this potion-induced affection and have Hermione really upset with him afterwards or is he going to realize that since the potion enhances any preexisting desires, that he should just wait and attempt to win her over the old-fashioned way, with charm?
person lupinsgal
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. Please, please write more very soon.
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story so far. Certainly hope to see more updates a little faster though. Your readers are hungry ! The last update was on September 4th, WAY too long for starving readers. Please do watch the spelling, other than that the story is great. Please don't give up on it or anything silly like that. Just update it and you will have very happy people here.
person Delfin
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story :)

love how its going so far, update ;)
person Scarlite
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing story...
I'm really curious about how this is going to turn out.
Keep writing, I'm a huge fan!
person Hope
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like thsi fanfiction please continue it.
I do advise to watch for spelling.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter!! plz update with all due haste!
(will hermione drink it?)
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cruel cliffie! Update soon we need to have some action!
person kmplease
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, what a fiend that snape is!! please update soon, im really hooked!!
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.