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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty hot and I can see this hateful!Snape-version, glorying in having an outlet for the frustrations and problems Potter jr. himself caused him for years, not to mention the satisfaction in humiliating his arrogant childhood-bullies son and godson.... And have Potter even begging him for it, wanting and getting off on it!
But I think sometimes you just go way over the top in terms of vulgarity and juvenile behaviour and it cheapens your tale imo: the farting or Snape using "piece of dung" sound rather OOC - Snape's insults for instance are normaly aimed at Harry's behaviour, lack of intellect (or unwillingness to use what brain he possesses) and parentage.
But I think sometimes you just go way over the top in terms of vulgarity and juvenile behaviour and it cheapens your tale imo: the farting or Snape using "piece of dung" sound rather OOC - Snape's insults for instance are normaly aimed at Harry's behaviour, lack of intellect (or unwillingness to use what brain he possesses) and parentage.
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very different turn and I wonder what's going to happen next. Keep up the very good work!!~Sophia
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update now!!!!!!!! sorry about that. i do love my kinky dirty BDSM snarry fics but ive never read a snarry fic along this plot line. please do continue *offers virutal cookie ^_^*. cheers!
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's going to be a short pwp.
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting start and I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the very good work!!~Sophia