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for Acting on a Dream

by metatron

person ccino49
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What a story. I'm not usualy one for slash, even thogh I do read it from time to time. But you got some style with your wrinting. Keep it up.
ccino
person metatron
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Seph7: I'm glad you enjoyed the story. This was my first foray into writing a M/M HP fanfiction. I love Snape. But I have two limitations writing slash...the first is I'm a hetrosexual female, and really have a problem believing I can realistically portray what goes on between two men attracted to each other. I really think the best I could do would be to write a female perspective and change the pronoun to "he" which I sincerely believe does not come close to the dynamic. The second limitation is knowing how much Snape dislikes Harry, despite protecting him. I don't think I could write a story where his dislike realistically changes...much of it due to the first limitation, not knowing how two men in love truly are. So I wasn't trying to write a "refreshing" story as much as I was trying to write within my limitations. I could see Snape being vindictive and taking advantage of Harry's attraction to get "a bit of his own back." And so that's what I wrote. Very glad you enjoyed it however, and your comments were most appreciated as all comments have been. Thank you so much, all of you.

schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! Loved it!!
person Seph7
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It was actually rather refreshing not to have Snape return his affections! I'm not into the whole domination thing myself, but seeing Snape dominate someone is actually really hot! Though personally, having a huge cock make me gag is such a passion killer!!! hehe!!
person metatron
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Took that stuff out, Aragon-san.
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A well-written story. Please continue with your fics! I'm very interested in reading more of your stories. I like the strong emotions between Snape and Harry in this fic. Most excellent work!!~Sophia
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That story was hot, I'd like to see fanarts of this fic.
Write more=) I'd like to see Harry,Snape and a woman.
person metatron
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How about Harry, Hermione and Snape?
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I dont think you should give up at all! (and I know you havent since I've already discovered your other story) I liked this, except that I too wanted Snape to kiss him... I know it wouldnt have been realistic, but still... *sighs* Oh well, I'll survive.

person Lucy
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm... Very nice.
Very realistic.
I feel like the realism of this story was the best part.
The hate, the vengance, etc.
Very very good.
I suppose Harry wasn't very realistic, but I feel like this story was more about Snape than it was Harry.
Anyway, I'm very impressed, I look forward to seeing more Harry/Snape fics from you.
Perhaps with a different sort of Snape, or a different sort of Harry.