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for Still The One

by KarenaEliz

person RickyRoo
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well done.
person Silverose
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
SO GOOD!!!!! (as I am still in a state of euphoria, thats about all I can manage :)
person RickyRoo
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey there!

I just came across your fic last night, and I have read up to Chapter 11 so far. I am really enjoying it and I can see why you have gotten so many reviews. Although I have caught a few mistakes in your sentences, I think you have a unique way with words. You use a great variety of vocubulary (which is a field I am not so strong in).

Anyways, I\'ll leave another line when I\'m done.

I hope that you\'ll take a second to click on my name and have a look at some of the Snape fics I\'ve written. :)

~Lara
person deblovesdragon
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful birth! I wish all moms could have Mother Earth give us a hand at birth.
I found it interesting that my older son\'s name was one of the choices for the baby... Cameron James. I personally thought it would haeen een a lovely choice for their baby\'s name. :-)
Great fic and I look forward to more chapters of Give Her Time.
person Rilla
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! I adore that they argued about names through the labor!
person bansidh
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Didn\'t pay attention to how long ago this story was posted. I just found it. I really HATE song fics (specially can\'t stand to see sappy ones in SS/HG fics), but that was one of the best places to see Ghost by the Indigo Girls. Gorgeous placement, well thought through.
person Lidra
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t help but feel elated you\'ve finished this. I\'ve waited so long! Loved every word of it. E-mail is above.
person Thauryaviewen
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I must admit this story was one-of-a-kind. I read through the whole thing only stopping to eat dinner! I sat back and in in tears at the end...I really enjoyed this story and I am refering anyone who wants to read a great story to it. I would like to note I am a sucker for a happy ending and this really got me.
person Tanya
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really loved this story! I was home sick all day, so I spent my time doing what I loved: reading wonderful fanfiction! Your story was so well-written and ~even though it took me most of the day to read~ I enjoyed every last bit of it! Oh, and I loved the garden at Snape\'s scene... absolutely wonderful!
Tanya~
person kerin
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
way to go! more grinning, wincing, and panting than a fat kid in a leotard. i give a 9.5...keep it coming! (no pun intended)