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for Still The One

by KarenaEliz

schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, looking forward to the next chapter! :)
person Arime Setta
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!
person Brooke
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Did I do a good job? Is the story running well? Are people actually enjoying it?"

Yes, Yes and Yes! There's enough tension and awkwardness between Severus and Hermione to keep it interesting. (from the unfinished kiss) And jealous Snape? Yum!
person barb burke
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A really,really delightful story Thank you so much for it!!!!Love,barb
person mona
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bloody excellent!
bloody bloody excellent (scuse me I\'m a Brit)

I don\'t know what I expected but not this! I promise you I laughed loud enough to cause my roommate to doubt my sanity, in fact I think I still have a stitch!

Brilliant beginning, love the sour, strong and bedamned Snape (as opposed to the misundersatood and rather comical Snape I keep bumping into) juxtaposed with a more powerful yet still good Hermione who seems to plot (and writhe) like the Slytherin within....

Great!
Mona
person mona
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I\'m going to be up all night with this one, I\'m a sucker for poise and poison and that is what you created in these two.

luve it darling!
person Miari
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Indigo Girls. \"In Love With Your Ghost\". Tack those points to Ravenclaw please;)
I JUST found this fic and it is simply WONDERFUL. Delightfully in character, yet believably ... well... not. Thank you for posting it complete, rather than making us wait for updates:)
person Geekerella
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve only read ch1 so far but I have to tell you that you are very talented and very funny. I was cringing at Snape storming in on Hermione while she was \"at it\". Brilliant.
person Melody
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEE! I luff this fanfic! So much conflict and drama! It\'s like the Harry Potter Soap Opera! Makes you feel bad for poor ol\' Siri-poo.... Oh well! \'Mione and Snappy are happy, that\'s all that matters! Im not sure I like the name Marcus, it bring to mind Marcus Flint.... Ew. Anyway, I luff you!!!! Like, alot.
~Miss Melody Ann Rivers~
person Karen
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It appears part of Chpt 11 is missing...please please please add the missing parts. It\'s hard to go to chpt 12 without the transition. Otherwise, I\'m enjoying reading your story very very very much. :-)