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i couldn't help but read the preview and i am now begging you for the next chapter!!! i know what you mean by old stories blending words. has happened to me many a time!! great story once again!! thanks

you are such a tease with that fourth chapter. can't wait to see how you handle things. keep up the good work. update soon please.

More more more!!

I like it! Your writing is good and the story flows well. Good job.

I think that there should be more. This doesn't have the feeling of being complete for me. I'd like the relationship to be explored further.

Please?

I am still immensely enjoying the story and can't wait till another update....What a tease you are with that *preview*!!! Now I cannot say if it is one of Sevvie's dreams or reality....

P.S: And now you have THREE reviews from me....and I will continue to torment you more *hehe*

cheers,

witch

You can't do this...suck me in to your fantasy and leave out
to dry...*whining voice* I WANT MORE>>>
PUUUHHHH-LEASEEEEEEE

Thanks for the response. Oh, and I see you are back to the awful teaser at the end of the chapter. How cruel. You missed your calling. Writer---nay--dominatrix. LOL I am sorry that the move maimed your baby. I feel your pain and will now bear the labor pains of re-posting with you... I can already feel the sympathy pains. Agony. Pain. Bring on the epidural. Post quickly please or I may have to start giving out little bits of plot. LOL Just kidding.... really really just kidding. I would never do that. I promise.
Thanks for reposting.

Oh my, that teaser was hot! I can't wait for the next chapter

Ah, very good. They are saying the right things, I mean in character. Please continue!