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May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for a new chapter and now I have to wait again. Oh well It is so good and I want severus too damn it!
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May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolultely love your story. The only thing I don\'t like is that its a WIP and now I have to check back all the time for updates! I think its flowing together wonderfully, and you don\'t have any major grammer mistakes and its all well formated, which I majorly appreciate in a fanfic. I can\'t wait for more!
~Alia
~Alia
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May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Bravo! Encore!
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May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this and I\'m looking forward to nextnext installment.
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May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This looks like it\'s going to be a fun ride! I laughed SO hard when he caught her \"in the act\"- poor Hermione! How embarrassing! LOL
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May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I stumbled across the first two chapters and was immediately take in. Hermione and Snape are well written and have an interesting tension from the first meeting. Did I mention that I thought Marc Kalet seemed a bit.......slimey, interesting, but slimey? I eagerly await your next chapter.
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May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So far so good, it\'s really getting off well (oops-I didn\'t mean it quite like that)
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i believe i reveied this before on Whispers. This is quite good and I hope you post more of it soon! I can\'t wait for more!
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May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is great! The suspense is killing me and I\'ve only read the first chapter so far. I can\'t believe this is your first try, it\'s really well written. Hope to see more soon.
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May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yep, I liked it! Please write more, and let me know when you update.
Aranel
Aranel