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for Still The One

by KarenaEliz

person QueenC
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, first of all, before I forget....what in the HECK was that teaser? Lol. (I just LOVED the line about him apologizing to Sirius in 2078..or around that time lol.) Gotta love the Snape sarcasm.

This part was wonderful, hun. And I almost felt bad for Sirius....NOTE I SAID ALMOST!! Lol. So...the next part is coming soon, right? Please? Lol
person Lady Aidil
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are killing me!I`m obsessed with Severus and love the man,yet I dislike Sirius,despite of his attractive appearance,so the thought she could have a love affair with Black is for me unbearable. All Sirius fans don`t blame me,please,I`m the devoted Snapefan only and the old Roman saying is my shield-\"De gustibus non disputandum est\". Now after these new revelations in last chapter you are teasing me as a reader too much-maybe wanting me to dye from both impatience and curiosity what you`re going to.Congratulations for the merry couple you and your husband have been,keeping love for many years isn`t easy,I`ve been married woman for 14 years,so I know it well.Of course all of us are obsessed- were we not what we would be looking for here.Regards.
person Zee
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I, for one,ADORE cliff hangers and personally, my stories tend to run 18 to 24 pages at a 12 font.

I am truly enjoying this! More! MOre!

Zee
person Aranel
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know if I\'m too late to guess, but the song is \"Ghost\" by the Indigo Girls. LOVE THEM! I really liked what this added to the story. Now I\'m going to read chapter 7.

Aranel
person Stacey
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please I need more!!!!!!!!
person RavenSparks
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s always fun to tease Snape with a bit of Padfoot to raise his bloodpressure! Throw in a Werewolf and, oh perhaps a redheaded weasel, and sparks would definately fly!

Just kidding around, enjoyed all the chapters so far! Looking forward to more, soon!

RavenSparks
person Marianne
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH!!! Man!!! HOw could you leave it like that??? And the teaser was to much!!! I think I\'m going to die of anticipation!!!
person Gill
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow - very hot!! But holy mother of Gandhi, please make them finally have some complete sex! You will, won\'t you (*begs, hands clasped*).? I don\'t know about them being whipped into a frenzy but I\'m certainly feeling a little heated!! These Snape fics just make me want to turn into a Rickman stalker - if it wasn\'t illegal, that is!! I can almost hear his voice in your story!! Good work - please keep going!!
person Alia
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karena, you had better start running! I can\'t believe you put a teaser at the end! I\'m just hoping that they get into a big fight and end it with some really hot make-up sex! ;) I mean, I can even forgive you for throwing Sirius into the pack if my former statement comes true! Wonderful chapter! Post again soon...very soon!

~Alia
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*grinning evilly.* Okay, one thing Snape hates is competition. This is going over like a lead balloon with him. I can hardly wait for the fight that follows? Or the making up! Get busy! I want MOREEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!