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for Still The One

by KarenaEliz

person fervesco
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is absolutely brill! It\'s so sensuous, yet light hearted, and funny. Definitely a pleasure to read! You have obviously spent quite some time plotting this and taken care in your writing (quite refreshing!). THANK YOU!
person Pearle
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very funny chapter! It is too bad muggles can\'t send messages back and forth so quickly. I like the birds attitude at the end. Next ter ter please.

Pearle
person GrrArrg
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!What a fantastic fic! I just stumbled upon it and read ch1 through ch9. I am sitting here at 1.46 in the morning with a stupid smile plastered on my face. You are undeniably the queen of unresolved sexual tension and I am having to control myself from shouting at the computer screen \"Just take her will you?\" But seriously I am enjoying the story a lot more because of them not getting it on straight away.However that little teaser tells me I\'m ready for the smut now!! i promise I will review whenever I can from now on if you promise to keep writing (a nice novel length story if you don\'t mind!) you rock!!
GrrArrg
person Amelia
schedule May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Evil, Evil, Eveaseeasers! Poor Hermione! *sigh* But she really should\'ve known better. Ah well, I\'m sure EVENTUALLY the two of them will work it out. *snickers* Maybe. Great story, I check every day for updates (Though now, I suppose, I\'ll cut down to checking every two days since you\'ve given me your updating timeline!). Keep up the good work!
person Alia
schedule May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karena - In response to the treat...two reactions...

Awwwwww! and Haha!

More to come later

~Alia
person Stacey
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter!! And the teaser was humorous!!!! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person Seraphina
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If they don\'t get it together soon, I may spontaneously combust!!!! Thank goodness she put Sirius back in his box, I was beginning to get a little panicky there, but he\'s allowed to be her friend.

As for the teaser at the end, do you have to practise at being unusually cruel or does it come naturally?!?! :-)
person RavenSparks
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*smiles a saucy grin*

Chapter 8 was wonderful! I like the tension and promise of what may come, that is, if Snape canave ave himself. What am I saying.....we don\'t want Snape to behave! (slaps own wrist for such a thought)

The treats are indeed injoyable! Thanks for throwing out the little teasers.

RavenSparks
person Snapesflower
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*cackling with delight and staring at her new beloved life size statue of dobby who is now considered to be her editor*
OMG!!!! Poor Severus!!!! I love it, hope she keeps jerking his chain....er....amongst other things.....*evil grin*
person Alia
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sirius didn\'t blow up when he found out Hermione was in love with Snape!! He was actually helpful! Such a nice change. Of course,
Snape is acting like a complete bastard, but if he wasn\'t, then would he really be Snape? Hehe. Ah, anticipation. And you said that this
story is turing out longer than expected...all the better for us readers! ;)

~Alia