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LOL.. you nearly died writting... i nearly died of laughter readin it.... LOL Very good keep up the fantabulous work!!!

I`m still alive and calm now ;) Of course my anger was moeasieasing than a really one.I was still convinced you`ve been writing HG/SS fic,nothing any more.You are the incredibly gorgeous writer so I enjoy reading of this fic very much and obviously I`m greatly satisfied Hermione is the faithfully loving woman and rejecting Sirius` ministrations even as he is more attractive man than my favourite.Poor `Mione was about to burst with tears before the front of the whole school!Sometimes Severus har harsh,bad-tempered,nearly nasty git-these features are pretty kept in character I think. Your teaser was really teasing!Severus wrote the note with apology-oh Merlin!The World is ending!Could anybody mop me from the floor?!LOL.Honestly I couldn`t bear waiting for next chapter so update as soon as possible,please!I`ve become your devoted reader.I expect some juicy lemon pieces as spices to the main storyline,the more as I like PWP if they`re well-written.Regards.

Well I haven\'t had a chance to read in a few days so I am a very happy camper today with 3 chapters to read and preview! So awesome keep them coming! I loved the last chapter with the letters and I like the addition of Sirus as a possible lover.

UMMM.......Bloody Hell, woman! I have to go to work now! *smacks forhead with palm of hand* Why, oh why did I read this chapter....now???

If that didn\'t convey my feelings of your chapter then, let just say I will be dreaming of a tasty velvet baritone voiced man today while I am at work!

*grins*

RavenSparks

Oh My!!!!! I loved the preview. What chapter was that for? I need more! Please write more!
BTW Great chapter. It reminded me of Bridget Jones\' Diary when Bridget and Daniel send e-mails back and forth to one another.

Oh My! Did I laugh throughout this whole chapter. It was the most funny thing I have read in some time. I loved the Raven...and it\'s last...uh...offering to Severus as it left. Just TOO funny. I also liked the way the letters went from formal addressing and closing to the more affectionate titles. Very well done...I love this story. I wait breathlessly for the next chapter.

RWH

Ok, so for those who wonder why in the world I would choose Chapter 9, if you think about it, how fun would it be to read the smut if you don\'t have the backstory leading up to it?

Now, Karena, my fav part of chapter 9, although it is a small detail, it added so much to the sequence, was the endings to each letter. I loved how they progressed from very formal to more intimate. It just worked so well. And the comment about Severus taking the charm off the raven and locking the door before he went to sleep, well that just cracked me up. I had a picture in my head of Severus Snape cowering under a glaring raven!

As for the new teaser, *gasp* *fans herself* I can\'t wait!!!

~Alia

Very funny chapter! I was laughing the whole time. As for your preview, what can I say but HOT! I can\'t wait for more!

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!
ITS SO FUNNY
YOU REALLY DO HAVE A GREAT GIFT FOR WRITING.

I HOPE TO SEE MORE SOON

*shivers* You and your evil bloody previews!

Delightful chapter! That poor Raven! Not that he didn\'t get ol\' Sev back in the end. *snickers* Verry entertaining and funny. Nice to see them making some progress!