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Oh my god! I am choking on the anticipation! It took me 45 minutes to get to the story again tonight. (I guess
I guess everyone was trying to read at the same time.) I was on chapter 9 when I had to stop last night, now I
dieing that there isn\'t any more yet! I love your style. You are a great writer. Every time I consider writing some
myself, I read something this well done and I a sure I could never live up to your example. If this is your
first fic, I am your fan for life. Write more naughty stuff, please. I love maiden Hermione learns the joys of
passion from Severus stories.

Breastlady

*claps* Much better - I couldn\'t find half as many mistakes. Hope you got my email.

Yes, I did like the story, honestly I did. I enjoy fanfiction for itself, however the story I cannot read is the story I am likely to really flame. As it was, it was jusme lme light constructive critisism - you obviously don\'t like the mistakes any more than I do, so I hope it was helpful. See email for listing *grin*

I do want the next chapter (you manage to find the most amusing closing lines for your spoilers, you tease) and I\'d also like to say sorry if you\'re afraid to write now. You have good writing skills, and a nice handle on thot aot and especially the characters (your Snape! As I said, and others have pointed out - SO Alan Rickman *drool*)

We all make the occsasional typo and grammar error, me most of all. Just thought I should let you kno som someone else could read it over *congratulates Alia on a good job*

Can\'t wait to see them dancing... *gets all fluttery and excited*

~Greenie

Honey, unfortunately. I have to flame you!!! I was reading over the chapter and I found the same mistakes that I pointed out when I beta-ed it! Did you upload the wrong one? You realize that I didn\'t change anything in the text, I just put mangeanges in the comment boxes, just in case you didn\'t want to change them or didn\'t like them. What happened????

But other than that, you know how I feel about your writing...it\'s so good it\'s not fair! Sirius is sooo in love with her! Kinda sad in a way. But sucks for him! HG/SS all the way!!!

~Alia

This is a wonderful story! Keep up the good work. I also have to say I\'m amused by all the references to \"Alia\" your Beta tester. I\'ve never met another Alia and I don\'t often see my name in print like that ;-)

Much better!!! Aren\'t you glad ughtught it? No unnecessary flames! :)

To the other Alia - Whoa, I\'ve never met someone whose name is actually Alia! I it it as a internet name (which follows that it\'s not my real name), taken from Frank Herbert\'s Dune books. Thats so cool!

~Alia

You\'re story is not TRASH!!! Girl please! I love it and pox on the house of anyone who doesn\'t.

I came, I saw, I read

Thanks so much! You made me feel soooo special. I can\'t wait for the next chapter though! The last chapter was awesome. I could imagine what Snape looked like when he heard the conversation between Hermione and Sirius.

Sweets, you mustn\'t let one bad review throw you off. Take it from me as a fellow writer, EVERYONE gets them.

On an entirely seperate note: I was just tickled to hear you\'d used my goldfish quote. *chuckles* I\'m sure Albus did it justice.

Someone needs to hit Severus upside his stubborn head. *raises hand and waves it* I volunteer! Can\'t wait to see next chapter! I\'m really enjoying your story.

Bravo!!! Another great chapter, even if Severus does need a good swift kick in the rump to make him move things along. I\'m sad that I have to wait another week for the next chapter *weeps quietly into hankieut iut if it takes them any closer to doing the horizontal mambo, it\'ll be well worth the wait!! Keep up the good work.

BTW. Just to let you know Mills and Boon are the UK branch of Harlequin Romance, hope that helps.