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for Still The One

by KarenaEliz

person Stacey
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yea! You\'re back! Anyways, awesome chapter. I loved it. Can\'t wait for the next one.
person Evil Orange Crayon
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hm... going with the \'to do list\'
1. Normally, I\'m not a Snape/Hermione fan. But, your fic has definite change of views on me. I really enjoy Still the One.
2. Next pay day, i promise!
3. um... you don\'t require sacrficies do you? I mean I\'m sure I could find something that would be worthy of such a thing, but on short notice it might take a while.
4. I\'ll have to read it next.
5. Nicely, would you please post more? Please?
person Silverose
schedule June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please please update soon!!! I have been checking everyday for a mmonth you aren\'t giving up are u?!? I love this story!
person Aranel
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, come on, already. Let them screw!!!!

No, really, I still love the story; you\'re still doing a great job, etc. etc. I am eagerly waiting for the next installment.

Hope RL gives you a break soon.

Love,
Aranel
person Anon
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey you are takeing to long to update!!
person Potions Mistress
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I sat here and read the entire story, well, all that you have right now, that is! I love it! I love the way they keep going back and forth between being together and not. This story is immaculently written, and I can\'t wait until you update again. What sort of business have u and your friend started, if you don\'t mind me asking. I like the Harry/Draco pairing, even though i don\'t usually like slash. I also love the previews you put in here. It makes a person stay up an extra hour to read all that you\'ve posted!! Poor raven (from several chapters ago) Is he okay? When do we get to see some smut?!?! *whines* i wanted to see some before i went to bed!! *sobs uncontrollably* I have no one that will love me, the least you people could do is give me my daily dosage of smut before i go to bed!! LOL. And i thought the mattress dancing comment was hious.ous. I mean, i have never tried it, but i\'m sure it would be fun. *smirks*. yes, i am a poor little girl (not really little, i\'m almost 18) and i\'m lonely! Anyhow, i can\'t wait until HP and the Order of the Pheonix comes out!! Update soon!!
person AprilGrey
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I esp. loved the raven driven mail exchange and the help she is getting from both Draco and Sirius. It\'s nice to see them as good guys. Looking forward to the next update.

April
person BakaChan
schedule June 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ARRGGG...... MORE MORE MORE MORE...... Sigh....I know and yet I havent had time to update my own story....sigh....hey it took me 2 days to read these chapters...

But it is really really good!

Keep it up!

person Inge
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heya,

I\'m soooooooooo sorry that I didn\'t review anymore *blush* But then again here I am :)
Just love your story, but hej, I ve allready told you that a 1000000000000 times if I had the chance
Keep up the good writing and don\'t let any stupid remarks and reviews bring you down... YOU ARE GREAT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

See ya

Hugs
Inge
person Lady Aidil
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I had some hard days so I`ve missed my favourite fic,but now find double entertainment reading two chapters.The title of the previous chapter is very proper-she was great performing angel-like nursing of Severus,outstright from pages of the adviser book \"Taking Care of The Very Inebriated Wizards\"-she almost could be the author!I`m not such a patient person especially with the drn crn creatures.Tha last chapter is magnent!ent!Snape behaves unbearably-his answer for Hermiona`s question about dancing was both rude and repulsive.How could he be such a insensitive,stubborn and tactless twit,if he regarded himself as a clever,bright man?It`s the well-done feature-kept in the cannon charr-her-he has a dragon`s ass skin in all relationships with the other people.This is the reason he deserves a hard treatment and I hope he`ll get it.Somebody must learn him to display feelings in a proper way and doesn`t let him be a dog in the manger-his jealousy is riddiculus,considering the fact that he is simply doing nothing for making things better.Hermiona would be the best teacher of the normal common people`s life,in my opinion.I afraid that her love and faithfulness should be extremely strong as well as her personality and resistance to mockery and cruelty showing by Severus on regular basis.I think these features are the utterly insecure maarmoarmor of defence against all unpredictable insults, because it seems Snape`s world is full of enemies both real and fictitious,without any warm feelings. Unlike Severus -Sirius is becoming the most protective and indulgent person in Hermiona`s circle.His will of support and coming help even for the good of love affair between Hermiona and Severus might occur the geniune challenge or plainly danger for Snape if he still maintained the attitude of control freak.I know-Snape is an uneasy,scared man,it might have been a humiliation for him,beeing found senselessly drunken by the woman he loves,that made him too much vulnerable,so he was so perplexed with the unability to express himself.I`m curios what will happen on the ball and what role Mr Kalet will play in the future,besides I want to see the Sirus` help.I imagine you could involve a lot of funny staff in these situations.
I`m only a reviewer,the one of many but I could imagine what the writer may feel-the act of creation includes both blissful and pain,the work is like beloved child,carefully treated,fed with the author`s feelings and hope,\"sweat and blood\"-so as you exposed it for readers` eyes you would feel vulnerably even naked,waiting for answers-\"blesses or flames?\"victory or defeat? I`ve never sent flames-if I didn`t like fic I`d have my own volition to read or not to read,without hurting anybody.If I found joy in reading I`d very willingly sing the praises,because the worse thing I too often find out is when the writer gives up and doesn`t end fic I`m used to.Congratulations for finding your beta.Very hot regards for one of my goddesses of Snape`s fics!Be still so marvellous and update soon,I would read this story even as it were hundreds chapters long!