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for Still The One

by KarenaEliz

person tbj
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe I\'ve never reviewed this yet either! I love this story. I love humorous romances, especially Severus/Hermione. The last chapter made me cry--no more sadness for our dear Hermione. I hope you have someone other than Sirius slap that clueless Potions Master upside the head. The previews are simply evil though--get ll wll worked up for nothing! More chapters soon please.
person Pearle
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
1. The story is wonderful, your wonderful, Snape and Hermione are wonderful, everything is wonderful, I love it, I love it, I love it.
2. I did donate to Aff and will happily do so again next month (I really do appreciate the work that goes into this site).
3. Karena Elizabeth is the Goddess of All Smutty Goodness (your words as per your request).
4. I will put your request for the forwarded chapters of Forbidden Lover on MY to do list, after I have read them of course since I have been following the story too.
5. Karena Elizbeth, please post the smutty goodness on Monday (soon would be ok too).

My goodness, what I have to go through just to get another chapter!!!!!!!!!!

Pearle
person fervesco
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Once again, absolutely wonderful! And quite humorous too! I am so glad SS seems to be finally getting over his arrogance!

person Alia
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I think I am the only one who can actually proclaim \"Karena Elizabeth is the Goddess of all Smutty Goodness\" considering I am the only one who has read the smutty goodness, but just so everyone knows, I consider the statement t Yo You know, its a good thing that I don\'t put my e-mail up here, or else I\'d probably have people sending me everything from death threats to bribes in order to get their hands on that outline! :) And about your comment about the other Alia, thank you very much but I don\'t swing that way! Hmmph! Really, would I be reading HG/SS smut! Hehe! But I did use your reviewing space, so I guess you are entitled to comment!

Ok, on to the actual chapter, I think my fav part in that one had to be the description of the dress. Did I already tell you that? For some reason I have this sense of deja written! Anyway, that was truely a piece of creative genius (yes, shameless flattery so you will write more and send me more chapters)! And of course, the dog pissing contest comment definitly made me laugh! Just so perfect for those too.

~Alia (the beta)
person yen
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lovely story! i hope to see the next (smutty) chapter posted on Monday, perhaps...? *wink,wink* *nudge,nudge*
person Red Writing Hood
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter here...I cant wait to see how Severus makes up to her for his...fibbing...he had better make it GOOD...LOL

RWH
person Amelia
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karena Elizabeth is THE Goddess of all Smutty Goodness!!!!!

There. It has now been so proclaimed. ;-) And I\'m right beside you in waiting impatiently for the next chapter of Forbidden Lover...

Lovely chappie, as usual. I adored the description of Hermione\'s costume. LIVE starfish...*snickers* Your character development of Severus is coming right along, it was nice to have him consider why exactly he was being such a silly ass - excellent choice of preview material. And Sirius\' stab about thanking him as he woke up to her every morning, shbrilbrilliance.

A huge thanks for your stellar efforts to get this site up and running again. I know all of us out here in Smutland are insanely grateful!
person BakaChan
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOHHHHHHHH; SIGH ! you captured severus and sirius so well......why do men have to be like that...ahh well....Make me happy pleas another chapter soon.....??????......Please!
person Emmaleigh
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on your show!!!!!!!!!!! money is good. Love the chapter. I am groovin\' on the Draco/Harry relationship, it\'s really interesting. Please ma\'am I want some more.
person Snapesflower
schedule June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I bow down to you O GODDESS OF SMUTTY GOODNESS and LOVE DANCES. Best way to attract a Snape is to piss him off. Boy, am I looking forward to the making up......*grins evilly*
Hurry up, quit making money and get some smut going!!!!!!!!!!!
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