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for Still The One

by KarenaEliz

schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ACK!!! Okay, yeah I am screaming, crying and begging for more!!! MORE MORE MORE!!! Please update soon! I am so anxious to see where this is going! I love your story telling technique... It makes me almost be able to see the images you draw in one's head. Love it!

Thanks for the update!

Shiloh
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
She was asleep! Poor Sev. Darn kids and their fouled up potion. They just ruined everything. What's she going to think when she wakes up? Will she realise that he didn't want to wake her, and put the blanket on her, or will she just think he never showed up? Please post the next chapter soon, so I can find out.
person Kirabates
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Simply put, you had me from hello. lol Great story, I just read all five chapters you have posted and I am eager to read more, please update soon, I'll look everyday. Love your story, give me more please.
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, that was really nice!!! Almost they got to do it...damn nosy students....i hope they will do it in future...

I look forward to that!
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for another chapter.
person witch
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haven't forgotten you yet!

wow...what can i say!? Love this story!!!

P.S: And it is my complete pleasure to torment you!!! Muhaha!
person juls
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You you you-- tease! I loved it. Sev should have woken her up or at least carried her to her bed and snuggled with her. Men I swear. LOL huggles~~ juls
person kipson
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
9 days!!! ARRRG... going on 10 days. The pain and agony are too much. Have you been captured by death eaters? Should we send out a recon team? Please, send word that you are okay. Need more lemons. thirsty for lemonade. With Severus sugar please. Really hope you are okay.

person Sacha's Girl
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, love the story. I think it is great that you didn't immediately have them end up in bed together. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was uhmmm... Wow! I got to get two chapters this time when I looked for it, and was so happy to have gotten them! This story is so cool! I only had one complaint! I want MORE! I wanted to scream when they got interrupted by the students! (But that just wouldn't do, cause my children would become entirely too curious!

Please post more soon! I can hardly wait to see what happens next!

SD