rate_review Reviews

I have melted into a puddle of fluffy, smutty goodness. What a wonderful chapter to read before I go to bed.

And to anybody who may review after me and see this... Muwhahahaaaa! *EVIL GRIN* You have no idea what\'s coming! Prepare youselves...

~Alia, the evil beta who feels the need to torture readers today! O:)

One word - satisfaction!


It\'s about bloody time! Great chapter. It was worth
the wait.

Hugs,
Corazon

PS
Thanks for the favorite author part! *blushes with pride*

Well I have to start this off with a big thanks for being so awesome and getting the site back up (ah what a girl will do when she can\'t have her smut.. *sigh*) Now, onto the review... I\'m not so great at these, so yeah, you\'ve been forewarned. Start review: aaahh smut. yay! You rock the smut train, hardcore. As for your warning at the end about the afterglow going away, wouldn\'t it be kinda boring if it didn\'t? All in all I really, really liked this chapter. a lot. want more. ASAP! :)

Lynn

Girl I cannot believe this is your first fiction. It is wonderfully written and very sexy without being pure smut. Kudos. I cannot wait to read more. Darn I have to stop reading things like this as I am currently single and do not need such stimulation. LOL JK great story!

Sigh just read it through. Now off to dream of two delightfully sexy dark men. You have a good sense of humor and I laughed till I cried during Raven mail. Excellent work!

Yay! It\'s about time they did it!

When they\'re doing it, he\'s THRUSTING into her, not trusting. Possessive is \"its\", as in \"The dog and its tail\". \"It\'s\" means \"it is\". There is no such thing as \"its\' \"....Anyway, cheesy grammar stuff.

Your story rocks! It\'s pretty much the only hetero story I\'ve ever been able to tolerate, let alone loved. Can\'t wait to read more.

Kisses,
Aranel

Reader \"To Do\" List:
1. Review \"Still the One\" (here i am, reviewing, i loved this chapter, although i did see a couple misspelled words)
2. Donate when the call goes out to keep the site up (i owe for a speeding ticket right now, and have no money, so i can\'t, although i will still try to)
3. Proclaim Karena Elizabeth the Goddess of all Smutty Goodness. (You, Karena Elizabeth, are the Goddess of Smutty Goodness!)
4. Review Snapesflowers \"Forbidden Lover\" and _demand_ she foward all chapters to Karena Elizabeth because she is dieing to know what happens. (she can only forwart the chapters to u if she does to me too, bc i am dying to know also!!)
5. Ask Karena Elizabeth nicely to post the smutty goodness on Monday - She just might! (Will you please post the smutty goodness on Monday? Wait, today is Monday!! And you did! YAY!!)

And also, no offense, but i don\'t need your husband for any dance parties, as i do not dance that much. I\'m glad you enjoy Mattress Dancing, as i have never tried, i wouldn\'t know how much fun it is. The scrapbooking thing sounds awesome! Where are you out of? (state). I love this story, i\'m going to read the other chapter now!!

BLOODY HELL!! I just read your teaser from the undisclosed chapter!! How can you bloody do that???? We just heard all of the smutty goodness, and then you tell me he won\'t marry her. She had better have misunderstood him or something?!?! Update soon!! Love the chapter!! And you are definately the Goddess of Smutty Goodness, or at least one of them!!

Oeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee love this story, that\'s one thing I can tell you
as for the cliffhanger :eep eep that in your mind - I m updating soon :-)
but I must say : KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
glad to see you back :)

CU online
Inge
xxx

Hello!
Here I am and I am reviewing. Great job! I am waiting for the matress dancing! *winks*

Hugs,
Corazon