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for Still The One

by KarenaEliz

person Seraphina
schedule June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah, sweet, sweet conflict! Just think of the wonderful making up that will take place. The interplay with Hermione and her mum was just top, and soo funny. What I\'m curious about is if Snape can\'t have children, or just thinks he can\'t have children?! I have my suspicions about t but but I\'m probably completely off beam. I shall wait and see what the great goddess of story provides ;0)
Anyway, thanks for another great chappie, I\'m off to Dark Sarcasm now to register my vote.
person Potions Mistress
schedule June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok, there are 25 hours and 45 minutes till OOTP!!!!!! YAY! Liked this chapter! What\'s wrong with Severus?? I can\'t go vote 4 ur story today i think, but i promise i\'ll do it sunday night!! Bye
person Stacey
schedule June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As always this was a great chapter. I can\'t wait to read more. You are the best!
person Alia
schedule June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Everyone go vote for Karena...you know you want to! Make her feel all good and warm about her story! Trust me, she puts lots of work into it! She just wants to make it known to more people! *gets teary eyed* (Do people actually read other reviews, or am I writing this for nothing? I know I am curious about what other people say!)

Ok, enough with the sweet talk. Hehe, the lines bet Her Hermione and her mother crack me up every time I read them. Definitely my fav part of the chapter.

~Alia
person Emmaleigh
schedule June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... just like real life. Nobody says what they\'re really thinking and what they\'re really feeling. Sigh STO goodness. You got my vote baby! You roxs like soxs in a box!
person Pearle
schedule June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great as always. This story definitely leaves me wanting more. I voted at Darksarcasm, unfortunately it will only let you vote once (I tried!). More.............please?!?!?!?!?!?
person QueenC
schedule June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I came, I read, I went and voted. Lol.

As far as I\'m concerned, you deserve to be at THE TOP of that list. This fic is simply amazing. I just loved this part, especiallyrmiormione and her mother arguing while Severus has to brave THE TALK. LOL. And, so I\'m assuming he can\'t have kids? Or thinks he can\'t? Something along those lines? Hmm. Well, as a mother, I can say that, while kids are the greatest gift we could ever receive, it doesn\'t necessarily make or break a relationship. I mean, hello? Do they HAVE adoption agencies in the wizarding world? lmfao.

Great part hun. Now...about those double chapters... ;)
person Morwen Snape
schedule June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I came into your story half way and wanted to read all that I could of it before I reviewed. This is great! I love Severus/Hermione stories. I love that you made it so hard for them to get together, because lets face it, it would be hard to startelatelationship with Severus. (That wonderful bastard). *gets on flaming box* I just have one complaint, and it may be an oversite by me, WHAT THE HELL DOES SIRIUS TEACH?! I didn\'t even know that he was a teacher at the school until the chapter when they go to London. I\'m like what castle? Sirius lives in a castle? He\'s a teacher?! I need to know, now! *steps off of flaming box* Sorry but it has been buggin. B. But other than that (well and a few grammatical/spelling errors) this is a great story. I can\'t wait for the rest of the chapters. *is really sorry for yelling at you* :\'(
person GrrArrg
schedule June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GOOD GOD WOMAN!!!!!! What are you trying to do, kill me?
First of all Snape as Darcy!!
My two favourite fantasy figures from literature (oh come on, eone one loves a bastard, even before they were played by Alan Rickman and Colin Firth on screen,though admitedly that helps the image!!) Thanks for that!!
And second, smutty goodness!!!
Yay, mattress dancing ahoy!
I have just finished the second of two days of twelve hour shifts and look at my lovely reward! so thanks for that too!
Bf cof course they can\'t stay happy like that, because we need more passionate fighting, which leads to passionate making up!!
I\'ve said it before and I\'ll say it again, YOU ROCK!!! more soon please
GrrArrg
person Pammy
schedule June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As good as always! Hermione has finally got her man...wheot lot love scene. Can\'t wait to see what else you have in store for this wild pair.