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June 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha... great... hahaha.... no comment...
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June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hullo, Sweet!
Great fun this chapter, love the interraction with her mum. *snickers* Reminds me of every conversation I have with my Grams. I really enjoy how you give distinctive personalities to your bit player characters. Can\'t wait for the next chappie!
BTW - consider yourself voted for. I\'m on my way over there right now. :-)
Great fun this chapter, love the interraction with her mum. *snickers* Reminds me of every conversation I have with my Grams. I really enjoy how you give distinctive personalities to your bit player characters. Can\'t wait for the next chappie!
BTW - consider yourself voted for. I\'m on my way over there right now. :-)
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June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just love story! Wonderful plot and I just can\'t wait to see what happens. And by the way I\'m off to Dark Sacarsm to give you a well deserved 10!!!!!!
I can\'t wait to read more.
I can\'t wait to read more.
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June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad you reviewed my ficlet the other day, otherwise I may not have stumbled upon your story.
I love the interaction of Severus and hermione - the anger, entendres and wit is very well done and not trite or contrived.
The smut is well done too - realistic, without reverting to the overused and erk - \'throbbing manhood\' motif of many smut fics.
I\'ll be interested to see where you lead the characters and how you tie that into either a happy or hateful ending.
I have my copy of OoTP, which I picked up this morning - I\'m planning a long, lazy afternoon.
I love the interaction of Severus and hermione - the anger, entendres and wit is very well done and not trite or contrived.
The smut is well done too - realistic, without reverting to the overused and erk - \'throbbing manhood\' motif of many smut fics.
I\'ll be interested to see where you lead the characters and how you tie that into either a happy or hateful ending.
I have my copy of OoTP, which I picked up this morning - I\'m planning a long, lazy afternoon.
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June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious parts with Hermione and her mother. And I almost fell over when she first introduced Severus to her parents...strolling for a whore?! Too, too funny. Excellent chapter all around.
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June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok this is the point where I\'m almost giving in and say pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase stop the torture with the previews... But then again I won\'t :-pp
As you said - It\'s pay back time *evil grin*
About the story: I love it !!! The fact Hermione\'s father was very friendly with Severus made me feel happy :) (I guess my dad would jump out of his seat when I would introduce him to my lover and show up with Severus :) )
So hun, keep up the good work, just love it :) *HUGS*
Talk to you soon
Hugs
SnapesAngel
ps: did I forget to mention: UPDATE SOON PLEASE Sna
As you said - It\'s pay back time *evil grin*
About the story: I love it !!! The fact Hermione\'s father was very friendly with Severus made me feel happy :) (I guess my dad would jump out of his seat when I would introduce him to my lover and show up with Severus :) )
So hun, keep up the good work, just love it :) *HUGS*
Talk to you soon
Hugs
SnapesAngel
ps: did I forget to mention: UPDATE SOON PLEASE Sna
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June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi hon
Fab new chapter.That Hermione is a firecracker isn\'t she? I love the way she introduces Severus to her parents!! I wish I had the power to minteinterlocking rooms like that, it would have saved a lot of uncomfortable situations in my youth if I could have freshened up before coming home looking like I had been shagged through a hedge backwards!! I am going to dark sarcasm (one of my faves too) now to give you a lovely big vote, no bribing needed although two chapters together is making me very excited!!
GrrArrg
Fab new chapter.That Hermione is a firecracker isn\'t she? I love the way she introduces Severus to her parents!! I wish I had the power to minteinterlocking rooms like that, it would have saved a lot of uncomfortable situations in my youth if I could have freshened up before coming home looking like I had been shagged through a hedge backwards!! I am going to dark sarcasm (one of my faves too) now to give you a lovely big vote, no bribing needed although two chapters together is making me very excited!!
GrrArrg
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June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heya Honey! Wonderful Story, I\'m really enjoying it, nice to see that its not to soppy and not to angsty...
I can\'t give critizsm not even constructive coz im not that great myself so i try to keep out of it.
Anyway, you better post soon, i wanna know whats wrong with my Sevvie...i think i know...is he incapable of having children? That would suck, i always thought a child was do such wonders for the man. Ah well its your story and your doing a better job than i could so ill leave you to it:P
Write write write:P
Catherine
I can\'t give critizsm not even constructive coz im not that great myself so i try to keep out of it.
Anyway, you better post soon, i wanna know whats wrong with my Sevvie...i think i know...is he incapable of having children? That would suck, i always thought a child was do such wonders for the man. Ah well its your story and your doing a better job than i could so ill leave you to it:P
Write write write:P
Catherine
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June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I haven\'t been so engrossed in a story since...hell...NEVER! And I\'ve certainly never spent 2 days reading thru all the chapters like my life depended upon it. It\'s a good thing my hnd ond owns the company or my asuld uld be fired for spending all that time reading when I should have been working. This is absolutely fantastic! I can\'t wait for the next installment...but wait I shall with feverish fantasies as to what Severus and Hermionie are going to get up to next. You really have a wicked sense of humor that is great to read. BTW...congrats on your business!
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June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for metioning me in your end credits. *is humbled* I love this chapter esp. the line where Snape says that he is more nervous than when he went up against Voldermort, *grins* nice touch. And snogging in the movies, can\'t get enough of that. WOOHOO. B mus must say that I am held in suspence at why Snape is infertile. I have my theories, but I can wait. You will tell us why he is infertile won\'t you?
You have done well in this chapter padowan; I havn\'t picked out any glaring errors (those are the only ones I can pick out and I am sure that you have corrected them).
P.S. Oh, I think that you are absolutly horrible in putting in spoilers. I try to scroll through them as fast as I can but then I end up picking out the juicy bits and have to go back and read it. *grins*
Looking ard ard to next chappie,
~Morwen
You have done well in this chapter padowan; I havn\'t picked out any glaring errors (those are the only ones I can pick out and I am sure that you have corrected them).
P.S. Oh, I think that you are absolutly horrible in putting in spoilers. I try to scroll through them as fast as I can but then I end up picking out the juicy bits and have to go back and read it. *grins*
Looking ard ard to next chappie,
~Morwen