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This was great! Does Hermione get dressed in time? When will he tell her that he loves her? I can\'t wait for the next chapter.

Wow. I just adored these two chapters! Lol, and to think that I had flowers VERY similar to the one used in that last chapter growing outside my window my entire childhood. lmfao (I\'m from Georgia, just so you know hehe)

Lol, I love the preview. I swear, I almost had a vision of Severus as an actual teenager...considering he told Hermione he felt like one, then started the typical \'crap, my mother\'s home!\'.

And, while, as a writer, I know how good it feels to finally see an end in sight with a fic, as a reader I feel I must say: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! I am SO not ready for this fic to end! *sniffs*

Anywho. As always, great chapters hun. I can\'t wait until Hermione meets the \'rents. Hehe

Okay, I\'ve just spent the last 28 hours reading Order of the Phoenix...nonstop...a great one but not what I expected at all. There\'s some very interesting new characters tho that would be fantastic for a pairing up. I won\'t give away any details just in case, but with a name like Nymphadora Tonks...how can you go wrong?!?! BTW...I love the song Black Velvet too LOL!

Two chapters of sheer bliss, thank you so much. Chap 17 was very sexy; the garden, the flowers, the scents, the sun and Severus, what more could a girl want.:0)) I loved your preview, what is Snape\'s mum going to make of Hermione? I suppose that depends on how many clothes she\'s got on when they meet!! Looking forward to those introductions being made in the next chappie.
BTW Black Velvet by Alayna Miles just suited them down to the ground, very slow, sultry and Southern.

i love the two new chappies. as to the ron thing, Ive heard its him they kill in the next book. And im totally for a draco/harry anyways. I love those two, almost as much as hermione/severus.

I can\'t remember if I\'ve reviewed any chapters yet or not, but I\'ve been following this fic, and I must say, it\'s fabulous. I think that you\'ve stayed true to character for both Severus and Hermione, all the while straying from the all-too-regular fanon pigeonholes of a more sexually explorative(read: promiscuous) Hermione and an emotionally wounded(read: desperate) Snape. The writing style if great, and you are an excellent writer of tasteful smut. for your question of future fic pairings, I think that Ginny/Remus are a great pairing, and for Ron, Lavender is an obvious fanon choice, and not a bad one, but Lune Lovegood, from the fifth book, struck me as oddly perfect for Ron- completely strange, yes, but absolutely honest(essential, since he\'s clueless about typical girl behaviour in da) an) and unwaveringly loyal. Plus, it\'s a weird enough pairing that it would make good plot fodder(Ron getting over being embarassed of \"loony\" Luna, etc.). Anyway, that\'s my two cents, and I will read anything that you post on aff.net

Yay! Happy chapter! *snickers* Hope she hops to it and gets dressed before his mum comes into view! I\'d write more, but it\'s very late here and I have work tomorrow. Brilliant as usual, can\'t wait for the next chapter!

You are incredible!I`ve simply got a headache because of realization how much I missed during the week-long break(I was in superb place taking the exhausting proffesional course,unfortunately without access to Internet)You are my really Goddess of Fics not only of smut and lemon,besides the quickiest updating writer I`ve ever seen.These three chapters I just finished after I`ve printed them(I`m an old-fashioned reader -prefer rather paper pages than computer screen despite I work with several comps` screens every day)are all gorgoeus,so I`m not astonished that you are so highly rated in ranks and get so many reviews.The dialogues between Snape and Hermiona are always marvellous -in chpt.13 I enjoyed the last part most of all because of greatly funny Hermiona`s statements about\"boys\"fighting like stupid dogs.I like Snape`s features with some bastard`s behaviours-he shouldn`t be fluffy even if he were in love.But ,of course,chpt.14 is my favourite-the last dance of the day-such a romantic (and a little nasty)situation-and this costume of Mr.Darcy-do you like Jane Austen`s books?I have to admit that several years ago I was convicted I didn`t admire them but now I read all and have found the very interesting world to explore,sometimes similar to Wizards World of HP.The costume fits Severus since he is the ancient man even more than the another male wizards.The sweetiest part of your fic is the beatiful love scene-both delightful and arousing,yet I suspect after previews that it is only short intermezzo and you are going to complicate their relationship even more than in previous chapters-I nearly can imagine your devilish smile-if Snape thought he`d got the point would be prepared for surprises and hard experiences despite their reconciliation.I expect the complications by reason of the misundertanding of intentions after the conversation about pregnancy -do you suggest that Severus is sterile and couldn`t conceive children,maybe as the result of his past,receiving of dangerous spells for example?It would be great difficulty if Hermiona couldn`t really bear this fact(I hope she could)The dinner with Hermiona`s parents-such a lovely and funny piece of social observations-Hermiona`s mother as the impatient grandma-in-the-future and very observant and clever father-I like him so much.The dialogue between Hermiona and her parents-especially hilarious introducing of Severus-I couldn`t help laughing-she is incredibly wonderful as she`s angry,so acerbic and cute-far more Slytherin she should be expected but with Gryffindors` bravado-I love the spicy hints you`re developing in small scenes like this one.I`ve forgotten to write that I wasn`t the fan of relationship between Harry and Draco-not at all-however I`d met some fics including this plot,but yet I find out that like them as a pairing and as the Hermiona`s advicers regarding the love affairs-sounds a little odd for me but I accept.The diversities of opinions following the differencies of experience could be very interesting and fruitful.I`m curious if you like the magic gadgets(not Inspector Gadget-thank you very much!)-my favourite in HP world is Polyjuice Potion-I enjoy possibilities of this item`s usage in love connections as well as the Invisible Cloak and brooms-they involves swirls of imagination.I like to observe the changes of Snape`s love ability-the paths of love are very narrow and tortuous for him,he`s insecure man despite his brilliant mind and inteligence-he hadn`t have got any lessons of warm and good feelings,only of cruelty.violence and mistrust-thi the the long and difficult way to normal life-so all of us-his fans-wish him to achieve. I want to ask you-are you one of these fans who can`t imagine Snape as a father or one of them they enjoy fanfics with Severus as a loving parent?Because I`m still not able to decide which option is more suitable.Regards for my beloved author with great request-promise you will certainly finish your work despite new HP book.(I`m waiting for my book from Amazon.).

Lovely work, well written! I\'m not usually a S/H reader but I quickly got caught up in this fic. I hope to see more of it soon.

Happy Writing,

Sinayah =)

omg! I absolutely love your story. reading it has made my day better (I found out this morning I have strep throat). I love the way you have presented your characters. Their in character enough to make the story easy to read but OOC enough to make it intresting- if that makes any sense at all. The settings and descriptions make it easy to keep up with whats currently going on, even though the story is very long. I began to skip the previews at the ends of the chapters, because i find the cliffhanger-ish in the magnitude of their evil propertys to much to deal with. Post again soon.