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for Still The One

by KarenaEliz

person Lace
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Remus and Ginny...a bit like Little Red Riding Hood. ~winx~ Seriously, I think that would be a fantastic pairing. There are so many possibilities with that one! You know I love the story! I\'m dying to know why Snape can\'t have kids. It\'s really interesting to think of him with family; mother, sisters, nieces, nephews, etc. This aspect of him is so intriguing!
person QueenC
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Augh! Dang it, Hermione REALLY needs to stop eavesdropping! It only leads to trouble, hearthache, and miscommunication! Grrrr.

Good for you for finishing the fic, hun! I know, it\'s a great feeling to have a completed work...now, about posting the parts of said finished fic so we can all share in the joy....Lol

I can\'t wait to see what happens next.

QueenC
person Stratyllis
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It is entertaining without being too unrealistic. Severus should just be honest with Hermione, she could take it!
person Seraphina
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please let Snape be wrong about his infertility, I soo want him to be wrong. Things have gone awry between them again and for the same reasons...Severus needs to keep his lip buttoned more often and Hermione needs to stop her ears flapping outside doors!!! Still, I\'m sure it\'ll all work out for the best in the end, I have total faith in you.

Sorry to hear about the bad rating someone gave you, but try not to let it get to you, just think about all the devoted readers who do appreciate your story. :0)
person BakaChan
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*jumps up and down clapping happily* Yea! the break I needed from all my stuff


person TeaRoses
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this! I love it! It\'s hot, it\'eat,eat, it\'s romantic, it\'s... yeah. Usually I\'m more subdued when I review things. I can\'t wait for a new chapter and meanwhile I\'m going to read it again... oh yeah, and I need to read Order of the Pheonix when my husband is finished with it. I don\'t think it\'s going to have any hot sex scenes though, darn.
person Andrian
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wicked you! leave me melting in a puddle once more...and I am all alone...

Really enjoyed it!!
person Inge
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You go girl !!!
Lovely chapter (saw a little preview on IM a few weeks ago remember :) )
The flowers... mmm I wish I was here LOL *blush*
He is such a sensual man in this story - very realistic btw :D
I hope you updaton !on !!
ow and eu, thx for no cliffie in the preview
I\'m updating tomorrow btw ;o)

Hugssssssssssss
Inge
person GrrArrg
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the delay iviewviewing but I didn\'t think anything would be happening online for a few days what with Order of the pheonix being released, and then of course I had to read it twice (yes I\'m obsessive I know this!) But look TWO fab new chapters you really do spoil us you know, things aominoming along nicely thank you, Hermione is a bit of a bitch isn\'t she!! Of course I love her like that and now that things are settling down between them I\'m betting there\'s a big row on the horizon! In answer to your question I would love a Ginny/Lupin pairing please as I am becoming quite fond of these two together, there are a few v.good fics about them but I would love to see your spin on them (I have a bit of a soft spot for Lupin). Anyway I\'m all yours again now until bo com comes out!!
GrrArrg
person Morwen Snape
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapters 16 and 17. They were great! I didn\'t find one mistake (granted I wasn\'t looking that hard but, oh well). Who knew that Hermione was such a feisty girlnk wnk wink. I can\'t wait for the next chapters. Oh and sense you have two full time betas I think that I will stop giving you corrections, cause I am sure that they will do a great job.
Oh, and I did it again. I tried to skip the spoilers and I caught \"coming down the drive\" and \"mother\" and I had to go and read it, curse you.
I think a good pairing would be Sirius/Remus, my other favorite pairing. But only if it MWPP era because when people write post Hogwarts stories they seem to be boring. They ususally consist of Sirius running from dementors and Remus feeling down cause he is a werewolf. BOOOOORING. But when peolpe do sto stories they get into a lot of trouble and have fun adventures. (that should be the other way round). Please don\'t do a Harry/Hermione or Harry/Ginny because then I will have to boycott your work and I don\'t want to do that. (I hate Harry/Hermione or Ginny parings. YUCK!!)

Waiting patiently for the next installment,
~Morwen Snape