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for Still The One

by KarenaEliz

person Inge
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok, you realise that you just broke 1000000000000000000 of girls their dream of wanting a child of Severus Snape *evil grin*
but well, great story line that s a fact :)
the fact he is acting like this is realistic enough for me !!! pushing her away, feeling lonely (just like jk described him yesterday in the interview)

keeeeeeep up the good work !! I am finishing Black Seduction on paper and will be typing it over next week :))

Hugs
Inge
person tbj
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey--I thought you said no more tears or sadness. [Sob], I feel so betrayed! Chuckle. More soon, please. I promise to vote!
person Corazon
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mmm! Black Velvet, how I do remember that one. It was one song
that give\'s me fond memories from college. I know I just dated
myself, but what the hell. Girl, you have done a fabulous job on
Still the One. I feel honored that I was able to help you out with the
beginning of it. Bravo!

As far as DarkSarcasm, don\'t worry about it. Every time one of my
stories rated above a 9.0., it was immediately knocked down to a
7 or 8. I ignore the ratings and look at my reviews. Those are the
ones that count.

Again, fab job!

Hugs,
Corazon
person Lara
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I mean, you are finished???? That was very evil to tell, because now the only thing I can do is looking wether you already have updated*g*. Oh, and I loved Snape`s mother in that ogreagreat character! Keep posting!!!!!!
person Silver Midnight
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay! A harry/draco! I cant wait! I loved this chappie. His mom seems cool, if a bit bitchy. I hope he stops being an idiot like the majority of males are when they\'re in love and wont do anything about it. I look forward to the next instalment of this ficcie.
person Ash
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
(There\'s a bit of frustration release here but complements at the end... promise...) AAAHHH!! i swear to whatever deity is listening that this story is wreaking havoch on my own personal emotional instability!!! you think they\'ve made up and its all happy and BAM!!! you get hit in the face with more sadness and confusion... i just want to grab both of them.. them being severus and hermione... tie them to chairs and MAKE them admit their feelings for eachother and MAKE severus stop dancing around his words and just SAY he\'s sterile! shes loved him enough to stay with him after she was shunted aside, gone to college, come back, and hes called her every name in the book and STILSTILL afraid she won\'t like him after a week of living with him when the truth\'s come out... well... he just needs to stop doing what he believes is thinking but is really just pissing on himself... *whew* venting can be dangerous... but i really do love the story!!! I swear I do!!! just gettin a tid bit confused as to whether or not they actually do like each other... and what was up w/ snape\'s mom? does likelike hermione or not? i THINK she does but after all those horrible things she said about her.. and then she tells severus to go after her anyway.. wholwhole thing is twisting in my head like a pissed off snake and im getting lost in my thoughts... and the worst part is.. that life really is this frustrating and people really are this senve..ve... i need more chapters and i need closure so i\'ve decided that i will be checking more than once a day for updates... yep... btw.. what does WCBNPAY stand for? and what did hermione\'s mum get for her? i don\'t think it ever said... and congratualtions on your sucessful show a while back.. i didn\'t say anything before b/c i just started this story like last night at 12 (had to take a break to sleep...) and finished it just a bit ago.. and whoever gave you zeros at dark sarcasm... piss on them.. you\'re a good writer and they\'re probably just some pathetic, petty whiner who got jealous and decided to take it out on you... screw em\'! welp.. this has gotten a bit long so i\'m cutting my rambling off here. Cheers, Lady Karena...
- Ash =)
P.S. i love snape\'s flower\'s stufo.. o.. queen of lemons, she is!
P.P.S. that last bit sounded a little yoda-ish....^.... you know... how he always switches around the words in sentences?
person GrrArrg
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi hon, Phew what a chapter!!! That man really is \"a complete bastard\" I don\'t know how much more tension I can take before I burst!! but I actually liked Snape\'s mother quite a lot, I mean come on I bet he was just as much hard work when he was a child and thats why she tests him like that. I can\'t wait for the rest esp now I know you\'ve finished it. yay!! I am waiting with anticipation for the Remus/Ginny story, and am sure it will be just as good as this one. I don\'t know what smartarse thinks it\'s funny to vote you zero but if you find out who it is let me know and I\'ll send the boys round to sort em out! or alternativly send them a howler!!! The reason I read the book twice was that I had some unexpected free time and now that Buffy has finished as well (my other passion, I know, how am Iam I?) I had nothing else I wanted to do, It really is a fantastic book. By the way the \"shagged through a hedge backwards\" thing came from my mum saying on numerous sunday mornings when I eventually crawled home from somewhere I probably shouldn\'t have been, telling me I looked like I had been DRAGGED through a hedge backwards, \"shagged through a hedge backwards\" was my mental interpretation of it!! more soon plz
GrrArrg
person morwen snape
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
SeveSeverus is such a PRAT!! Gah *pulls out hair in frustration* if he would just tell her what is going on things would be soooo much better, but you know that. I know that a story has to have conflict or else it stinks, but for the love of the gods! *takes a deep breath* I\'m good. I think, I will wait for you to put the rest of the story on aff.net, just because I can. It will be so much fun to watch the story progress.
And to whomever gave you zeros, as soon as I find out who you are I am going to give you such a talking to. (Because I really can\'t do much more than that seeing as how I\'m on the Internet and all.)

Looking forward to the next installment,
~Morwen Snape
person Bree
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to hear that the story is finished. Although I will not be totaly satisfied until I am able to read the entirity of it. This fic is great and I hope that you intend to update soon!
person Stacey
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You\'re right; I do want to know what he does! Oh man! I can\'t wait to see the next chapter and to start reading the new fic. Please update tomorrow! Please! :)