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for Still The One

by KarenaEliz

person Stacey
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh ma can can\'t wait that long for the next chapter! When does Severus find out that she\'s having a baby? What will his reaction be? I really need to know but I will try to be patient. By the way the chapter was awesome!
person Potions Mistress
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO She\'s got to tell him, she\'s got to!! Why did Severus think he was sterile if he wasn\'t? I\'m sorta confused now! Please update soon. I love this story!
person Lara
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, okay, I
person Lady Aidil
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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person Lady Aidil
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I`m coming back to wonderful world of Snapefics-especially to your fic-to heal my broken heart after reading OOTPbecause of sadness and sorrow I really feel thinking about all revelations Snape had been involved.These of fans who`ve finished the book know what I mean-I don`t want to write any spoilers,keeping in mind all people they are still reading.I`ve got depression and was pretty unable to read anything else than posts on mailing lists containing OOTP discussion but yet I came to conclusion that it`s the time to take an antidote so I checked AFF and found out that you continue this admirable work-it was truly relief you are not so insane like me.I appreciate this fact and thank you for my Healing Potion despite I `ve yet been in proper mood.
The Gardenias is the most beautiful chapter you`ve ever written IMO-this scene of seduction is even better than previous one-flowers sequence has built the increasing tension and arousal between HG and SS,felt by the reader as well.the next chapter was simply amazing-first of all by reason of both cowardly and awful Snape`s behaviour-the title of chapter is perfectly proper to the situation-in contrary to way he`d behaved before-he became unbearably person especially throwing her out-it was rough and hurting-a very adult man hurts young woman and her very delicate feelings-in this point she`s so vulnerable-and his awkwardness when he`s talking about their future-I sometimes think that he doesn`t deserve her.
Thank you for adding his mother to the plot-she appears wiser than her brilliant son!
I`m glad you finished this marvellous story.Regards from a little tired Snapefan.
person Amelia
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! Her Hermione! Meeting the fam sucks. Hope she makes him jump through hoops for at least a couple chapters. *snicker* Great job this chapter! I\'m off to join your mailing list....
person Alia
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
All hail Karena Elizabeth, queen of major plot twists which cause readers to want to tear their hair out! *bows*
ehe,ehe, you all still have no idea!!!!

Way to go, and down with DS!

~Alia :)
person Drey
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So?

::tapping foot impatiently::

Where is the rest of the story? I want more! I want Hermonie to knock some sense into Seve Or Or someone to do it anyway! If I could, I would.

::sigh::

Okay, I\'m done ranting.

Could you please post some more soon? Pretty please with chocolate Snapies on top?

::turning on her \'sad\' puppy look on full force::
person Pammy
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Snape, you ass! Hermione wouldn\'t care if he couldn\'t father kids. Can\'t wait to hear the reason why. Loved the addition of his family. Makes him seem more normal than the scary jerk he\'s always portrayed as. ^_^
person Potions Mistress
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why is he sterile? That sucks, but the story reatreat!! UPdate soon!!