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for Still The One

by KarenaEliz

person christina
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue this story, it's awesome!
person Christina
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Really good story so far, I can't wait until you post more, you can bet I'll be here reading them. I don't know if you have offers on the beta, but I wouldn't mind, I have lots of time on my hands, and I am actually a writer, so I would be happy to help! Anyways, good job, and I love the story!
person kipson
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's the Indigo Girls and the song is GHOST. Thank goodness you are back. Terrible visions of an abandoned story have been running through my mind. Glad to see that all is right with the world again. Great Easter present by the way.

I would be happy to try my hand at Beta-ing, but have never done it before. However, if you are desperate, I would be willing to help. I read the story the first time it was posted (before the move) and so I know the plot line and where you are going with this wonderful fic. Let me know if you need any help or if not, no hard feelings.

Waiting patiently for the next update here in insomnia land. :)
person Domine
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That would be Indigo Girls- Ghost. I love this story so far. I look forward to the rest. You still have some issues with chapter 6 but nothing too bad, just a mispelled or missing word here or there. Hermione will realize that he came by won't she? He did put the blanket on her. And they should both realize between the corespondence and the interupted foreplay that they do want each other. If Severus didn't care he wouldn't have bothered to write back to her at all. If Hermione didn't care then why the hell did she start writing in the first place? People in love are so dumb. I know, I'm like that too... and I'm married to the guy I'm in love with. Give us more soon please.

Domine
person Darque Hart
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't even started reading this and already I am confused. You wrote at the top of Ch. 1: "I don
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person foofie
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Indigo Girls - Ghost. i love this story and i am looking towards more please update soon
person droxy
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! This is great, hot, romantic SS/HG smut! Who could ask for more. The tension is great!
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am looking forward to the chapter that you gave us a preview to.
person Nicky
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's been a long time since I've been on AFF, what with them redoing the whole site and everything, but when I got back you were the first author I looked up! I'm enjoying this story very much and looking forward to the next chapter.

Sorry I sort of dropped off the face of the earth when I was supposed to be beta-ing for you a year or so ago...I started graduate school and my social life (including fanfic) got put on hold.

Can't wait to see the next chapter!