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July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is such an amazing story. I have to admit to posessing a good deal of envy when it comes to your skill in depicting the characters realistically and keeping the conflict rolling! It\'s a true talent, and I do hope you realize that. I\'m terribly impressed, my dear. I know how good long reviews feel, so I\'ll continue *grin*.
I\'m a big fan of the way you can build the tension and then back off again. It definately keeps the readers interested, I know I was! Anyway, I review infrequently, but I just had to tell you how very impressed and envious I am. Plus, I had to mention that Robin Hobb is among my favorite authors, so we seem to have yet more in common (the Farseer series makes my knees weak. It\'s like my achilles\' heel...I will put down any and all notable literature th am am currently devouring in order to reread those books). I will keep looking for your further exploits in the online writing circles, and I do so hope you\'ll continue to write at the fervored pace that so many of your fans have come to depend on and love.
All best wishes,
Iphy
I\'m a big fan of the way you can build the tension and then back off again. It definately keeps the readers interested, I know I was! Anyway, I review infrequently, but I just had to tell you how very impressed and envious I am. Plus, I had to mention that Robin Hobb is among my favorite authors, so we seem to have yet more in common (the Farseer series makes my knees weak. It\'s like my achilles\' heel...I will put down any and all notable literature th am am currently devouring in order to reread those books). I will keep looking for your further exploits in the online writing circles, and I do so hope you\'ll continue to write at the fervored pace that so many of your fans have come to depend on and love.
All best wishes,
Iphy
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July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please write more soon! Youre doing a great job!
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July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::smile:: ::sob:: ::grin:: ::cry:: ::beams:: ::weeps:: Why oh why?!?!? This is so sad!! Poor Hermione! Poor Severus! They just want to be together! And evil, evil Sirius! (well, not really, I kinda feel bad for the poor bloke) But I trust this will be a happy true love everlasting, Ms. KarenaElizabeth!! Or else! Anyway, GREAT JOB!!!! I don;t mean to be blasphemous but you writing captures me more than the original!! ::gasp:: :) Looking forward to an update soon!!!!
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July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That really was an evil preview, but I can\'t hold it against you because I read it of my own accord.
Ahhhh, hormones. Hermione is a very confuzzling pregnant woman (but then again I guess most pregnant women are). One minute she is crying then....hand job in a resturant. Nice. Ha! now we finally get to the meat and potatos of Sirius\' work. I have been waiting for this ever since I started this fic. And I\'m guess, having read the evil preview, that we are going to see much more of Sirius\' _work_. I must say thi this was a very short chapter, but very good.
I\'m sorry that I phrased that you were the cause of Sev and Hermy\'s problems. I was distrought and anything I said to that effect were the rantings of a crazy woman. *hugs*
Waiting for the next installment,
~Morwen Snape
Ahhhh, hormones. Hermione is a very confuzzling pregnant woman (but then again I guess most pregnant women are). One minute she is crying then....hand job in a resturant. Nice. Ha! now we finally get to the meat and potatos of Sirius\' work. I have been waiting for this ever since I started this fic. And I\'m guess, having read the evil preview, that we are going to see much more of Sirius\' _work_. I must say thi this was a very short chapter, but very good.
I\'m sorry that I phrased that you were the cause of Sev and Hermy\'s problems. I was distrought and anything I said to that effect were the rantings of a crazy woman. *hugs*
Waiting for the next installment,
~Morwen Snape
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July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was sooo evil of you. you just had to leave us hangin like that. can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!! that is probably one of the saddest things I\'ve ever read! There\'s nothing sadder than just excepting defeat rather than fighting for what you love, I feel like beating Snape round the head with a blunt object (I don\'t know where these violent tendancies keep coming from!) and their complete lack of communication infuriates me! Oh and by the way YOU ARE EVIL!!! *grins* I am not reading any more of your evil previews, are you trying to make my head explode?? Still luv ya though, more soon plz
GrrArrg
GrrArrg
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July 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Terrific chapter, and yet again an evil preview. As much as I desperately want Severus and Hermione to be together, which as you said before, they will at the end. I fear for Sirius\' feelings. I really hope that you don\'t hurt him too much. But this is truly a great fic with some of the best angst I\'ve ever read! You have some real talent here, and your quick updating is wonderful. Its nice to see an author who doesn\'t take so long to update that the reader has to re-read the last chapter to remember it! So keep up the fab work and I look forward to your next chapter!
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July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Evil!Karena Eliz-are you yet an unreckognized Slytherin?!This turn of action was incredibly good for the development of following conflict -simply as the prevention of turning out the fic to fluffy thing.Maybe this bucket of icy water for our loving couple was too cruel but I want to see next chapters fullfilled with tension and surprises so I`m very glad you`d complicated them the way.
Poor Severus thinks he is completly sterile and hasn`t ever considered Earth magic(I`d met this term in other fics yet in another way of usage) it might be because of beeing male yet this kind of magic is basically belonging to women.But what difficulty brings it to their relationship-he distincly told Hermiona that her pregnancy would be a proof of her infidelity so I`m not astonished she`d refused to inform him however I`m not convinced if this statement were the reason of her decision-since I don`tw ifw if she`d ever noticed meaning of Snape`s words-it`s more probable she was upset and angry thinking about the whole problem of future life with Severus as she regarded his total,hurting and simply awful rejection of children`s idea-and he has not still said about the sterility!Childish pride and difficulty with self-esteem-I daresay.
As regards Hermiona`s character-she`s still brave more than reasonable despite her highly rated intellectual abilities-rising up kid of the unknown father in such an ancient and biased society as wizards world is,appears the greatly hard challenge(otherwise we know precious Hermiona likes challenges,no doubt)and leaving Hermiona the problem`s to resolve-would become as stubborn as Severus-the one is worth the other in this case. Dambledore`s warning in your preview gave us the announcement of following disagreeablenesses Hermiona would be exposed lasting lonely with her choice.
I want badly to see how this situations will be going and wait to next turns of storyline.It`s enjoyable and admirable fic-indeed.
Poor Severus thinks he is completly sterile and hasn`t ever considered Earth magic(I`d met this term in other fics yet in another way of usage) it might be because of beeing male yet this kind of magic is basically belonging to women.But what difficulty brings it to their relationship-he distincly told Hermiona that her pregnancy would be a proof of her infidelity so I`m not astonished she`d refused to inform him however I`m not convinced if this statement were the reason of her decision-since I don`tw ifw if she`d ever noticed meaning of Snape`s words-it`s more probable she was upset and angry thinking about the whole problem of future life with Severus as she regarded his total,hurting and simply awful rejection of children`s idea-and he has not still said about the sterility!Childish pride and difficulty with self-esteem-I daresay.
As regards Hermiona`s character-she`s still brave more than reasonable despite her highly rated intellectual abilities-rising up kid of the unknown father in such an ancient and biased society as wizards world is,appears the greatly hard challenge(otherwise we know precious Hermiona likes challenges,no doubt)and leaving Hermiona the problem`s to resolve-would become as stubborn as Severus-the one is worth the other in this case. Dambledore`s warning in your preview gave us the announcement of following disagreeablenesses Hermiona would be exposed lasting lonely with her choice.
I want badly to see how this situations will be going and wait to next turns of storyline.It`s enjoyable and admirable fic-indeed.
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July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness. Why won\'t he tell her. There is such a thing as too much pride. I have really enjoyed this story. It\'s so enjoyable. The right amount of good smut with a realistic plot. I even love Draco & Harry, they are a cute messed up couple too, although not as messed up as Hermione & our dear Potions Master. I guess the flower had more magic than just lust.
Jen :)
Jen :)
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July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hi there,
sorry i havent reviewed in a while, ive had a bad coulple of weeks
back stabbing friends exams heart breaking break up
so ive been real depressed lately
but anyway
just read a few more chap and and i have to say i love them
god really did give you a great gift
but how is hermione going to explain the baby and will snape belive her
well guess we will just have to wait and see
sorry i havent reviewed in a while, ive had a bad coulple of weeks
back stabbing friends exams heart breaking break up
so ive been real depressed lately
but anyway
just read a few more chap and and i have to say i love them
god really did give you a great gift
but how is hermione going to explain the baby and will snape belive her
well guess we will just have to wait and see