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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bravo Karen Elizabeth! Bravo! Yes, the epilogue made
up for it. Super job on your first fic! I loved it!
Hugs,
Corazon
up for it. Super job on your first fic! I loved it!
Hugs,
Corazon
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
geez, poor Sirius/Snuffles always seems to get the short end of the stick. As much as I love Sev & Herms, couldn\'t help feeling sorry for Snuffles. His intentions were honorable, after all. *sigh*
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*wipes away tear* That wonderful man. I love him all the more now. (BTW way can I have your permission to edit the gardenia/Great Hall scene into my fantasies? It is so romantic.) Yay! Sevvy and Hermy are together (finally). OH, and very nice epilogue. Hermione is VERY kinky I wonder if Sev. knows what he is getting into (bed with)?
I soooo wanted to give you a grand last review to send you off into your next story, but I am to overwhelmed with grief that the story is over to think properly. If I think of anything wohilehile to tell you I will review again.
Not able to wait untill next story,
Morwen Snape
I soooo wanted to give you a grand last review to send you off into your next story, but I am to overwhelmed with grief that the story is over to think properly. If I think of anything wohilehile to tell you I will review again.
Not able to wait untill next story,
Morwen Snape
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karena,
you GO, girl!!! Your next story sounds pretty cool. I\'m so tired of reading Ginny paired w/Harry, it\'s really interesting to pair her off w/a Sexy Older Guy (Remus, here). Why should Hermione have all the fun (and the hott sex?!?) ^_~ I\'ll be reading avidly *grin*
you GO, girl!!! Your next story sounds pretty cool. I\'m so tired of reading Ginny paired w/Harry, it\'s really interesting to pair her off w/a Sexy Older Guy (Remus, here). Why should Hermione have all the fun (and the hott sex?!?) ^_~ I\'ll be reading avidly *grin*
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July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was such a great chapter! They were totally in character. And you\'re right, they don\'t have good people skills and they aren\'t the type of people to just sit down and talk, so well done! I just love Sirius in this chapter, and I\'m glad he understood and didn\'t take the news badly. So another well written chapter and I look forward to your next one! And when you think about it, the angst keeps everyone coming back, and when you write is as well as you have done, you can
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July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! New chappie. .Now.Now to the review
ARRRRGH!! I know Sirius has GRANDE amounts of feelings for Hermione, but marriage. He probably hasn\'t spent a whole day alone with her, and they haven\'t gotten into a good fight. You cant marry someone without throwing at least one breakable at their head during a fight. (but I think that is just me). On the other hand Sirius would make a good daddy. *is a loser for playing both sides of the fence*
Finally the truth comes out. Phenoix feathers!! Why didn\'t I think of that? Way to make a belieable reason for the return of his *ahem* manly devices *ahem*. And they finally get together on the fact they are having a . W. WEEEE! I love the part in a story when it all comes together and gets to the end. (but then I realize it _will_ end and I start to sob).
What was Draco\'s advice from the last chapter? Or will you pull an author\'s trick and tell us from the view of Severus telling Hermione? I\'m so confused!
I have decided that everyone needs a radar to known non not to enter a room. It would solve so many problems. Or I guess people could just lock the door..... yeah, that makes much more sense.
Thank you for explaing your logic for Sev\'s behavior. I now understand. Oh and you can\'t comfort Sirius in a indecient manner I have already done that. HA!
Realizing that the story is coming to an end,
Morwen Snape
*sobs*
ARRRRGH!! I know Sirius has GRANDE amounts of feelings for Hermione, but marriage. He probably hasn\'t spent a whole day alone with her, and they haven\'t gotten into a good fight. You cant marry someone without throwing at least one breakable at their head during a fight. (but I think that is just me). On the other hand Sirius would make a good daddy. *is a loser for playing both sides of the fence*
Finally the truth comes out. Phenoix feathers!! Why didn\'t I think of that? Way to make a belieable reason for the return of his *ahem* manly devices *ahem*. And they finally get together on the fact they are having a . W. WEEEE! I love the part in a story when it all comes together and gets to the end. (but then I realize it _will_ end and I start to sob).
What was Draco\'s advice from the last chapter? Or will you pull an author\'s trick and tell us from the view of Severus telling Hermione? I\'m so confused!
I have decided that everyone needs a radar to known non not to enter a room. It would solve so many problems. Or I guess people could just lock the door..... yeah, that makes much more sense.
Thank you for explaing your logic for Sev\'s behavior. I now understand. Oh and you can\'t comfort Sirius in a indecient manner I have already done that. HA!
Realizing that the story is coming to an end,
Morwen Snape
*sobs*
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July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
did i already told you that you inspire me? *grins*
Just love the whole story glad that it\'s going to be happy :)
you are good and you know it ;))
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Just love the whole story glad that it\'s going to be happy :)
you are good and you know it ;))
hugs
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July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
BRILLANT! This is so much better than Hermoine just crumbling before Snape and bursting intors ars and saying YES YES YES! You are truely amazing my dear!
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July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, Hermione was very \'talk to the hand,\'cause the face ain\'t listening\', wasn\'t she? Great stuff. I\'m sad that we\'re nearing the end, but I\'m also happy that there\'s a new story to look forward to and that we\'ll still get glimpses of S & H. I can\'t wait to see what he\'s got planned in order to win her back, something really hot I trust;0) . Friday can\'t come soon enough!
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July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
This is my first time to write a review to anyone from AFF.net. Well, I adore your story, Still the One. I read all the chaters wanting more and more, but I\'ll have to say that chapter 20 made me cry. I felt so sorry for Severus...Just one question...Why not talk together... I mean, if they are so in love with each other, sh the they do something to be sure that the other does not leave? Shouldn\'t they just be talking with each other instead of Sirius or Draco?...
Well have a nice day and please be fast with the next chapter... I just hate waiting!
Vcky Lynn
This is my first time to write a review to anyone from AFF.net. Well, I adore your story, Still the One. I read all the chaters wanting more and more, but I\'ll have to say that chapter 20 made me cry. I felt so sorry for Severus...Just one question...Why not talk together... I mean, if they are so in love with each other, sh the they do something to be sure that the other does not leave? Shouldn\'t they just be talking with each other instead of Sirius or Draco?...
Well have a nice day and please be fast with the next chapter... I just hate waiting!
Vcky Lynn