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for Saving your life

by lilmisblack

person Jen618
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just a small correction. it doesn't really snow in Australia, pretty much only on a couple of mountain tops. It certainly doen't look like a xmas card. Maybe you mean Austria?
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not only did I not find any blatant bloopers, but am pleasantly surprised to find an author that does not snap at those who leave helpful comments. For that, I won't even moan about the cliffie. [much]
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow .. will sev get mione ... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person CB13
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is riveting! Keep up the good work. You're a good writer, technically, and you're pacing the story quite well. Cheers!
person Anon
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loving it! i check everyday for your updates! :)
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, is it someone from the order that he heard? oh snap! =P Ooor maybe not, cant wait for more chapters!
person m. majere
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter & cliffhanger supreme! At least they are both demonstrating their feelings now.
person pickles87
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you for a new chapter. it was fabulous. waiting for more.
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!! Oh man. I love it.