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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1-10
I'm not saying I'm picky or a perfectionist or anything, but I usually read about the first couple of chapters before I decide if I want to continue with a story. You know, the let more of the plot form, get the characters introduced, get used to the style of it all.
This one caught my attention within those limits easily. I haven't read many Snape/Mione pairings, I have to admit. But this one intrigued me. Instead of just reading it to get to the end, I find I got lost in this to see where it's going, how people react, consequences for the two of them and when the true feelings will be acknowledged.
I'm anxious to find out what the other Order members will say or what they might think if or when it comes out about the two of them.
Excellent job :D
~SB
I'm not saying I'm picky or a perfectionist or anything, but I usually read about the first couple of chapters before I decide if I want to continue with a story. You know, the let more of the plot form, get the characters introduced, get used to the style of it all.
This one caught my attention within those limits easily. I haven't read many Snape/Mione pairings, I have to admit. But this one intrigued me. Instead of just reading it to get to the end, I find I got lost in this to see where it's going, how people react, consequences for the two of them and when the true feelings will be acknowledged.
I'm anxious to find out what the other Order members will say or what they might think if or when it comes out about the two of them.
Excellent job :D
~SB
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting chapters. So, he doesn't know what they are doing together. Keep on going with the story! Thank you for adding some hope for them in there.
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow ... that was great .. and now they got that taken care for .. what is going to happen next .. please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now
angel
angel
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh... this is my absolute favourite story!!
You have to update it more frequently .. no really.. UPDATE!!!!! xD
i love your work!
You have to update it more frequently .. no really.. UPDATE!!!!! xD
i love your work!
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been following this story devotedly since your first post. I was following several other stories as well, but yours was and is the only one I'm still interested in! The smutty bits are very good, and frequent {the way it should be ;)}. Please keep it coming and don't break my poor little heart.
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great update!!!!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally just read the whole story - at least to what you have written. I LOVE IT!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter. I dunno about Hermione's reactions... if I were her I would be livid with Snape... but I guess I'm not involved in a wizard's war huh? Hopefully she'll be able to set him straight... ???
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man... i hope that helps them out .. please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now
angel
angel
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a fine story of passion betrayal epsionage love amd war
A damn good read
I will look out for othe work
Thank you for sharing this with us
A damn good read
I will look out for othe work
Thank you for sharing this with us