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for Saving your life

by lilmisblack

schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! :D
person alli
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please come back. we miss you.
person Abby
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this story. The idea behind it is really good, and the characters seem true to canon. It's all completely believable. With this particular ship, it's hard to think of a way for the two to realistically get together while being true to the books since they don't particularly like each other in canon, but I think you did a great job with it. I literally was up all night reading this because I couldn't stop. XD

My only critique is that there are sometimes grammar mistakes and typos that come with not editing a story. I would suggest finding a beta, if you haven't already. If you're interested, I can do it. Let me know. :)

Anyway, now that I'm done whoring myself out... XD

I hope you post another chapter soon because I really want to know what happens. Keep writing, please!
person pickles87
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A new love interest for Hermione????
NO WAY!!!!
Chapter was excellent.
Will it be Kingsley? since he seems to be showing a personal interest in the last chapter?
Draco???
person mari
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay an update another wonerful chapter cant wait for the next one....hm hermiones new love interest huh? could it be kingsley? please please please update soon...but no pressure hehe but PLEASE update when u have a chance i am addicted to this story haha ^_^
person Bree
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is it possible that Hermione's new love will be her child???
person Sweetie
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think the new love interest will be kingsley
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can Potter not see what is plainly in front of his face?? Severus is innocent and put in a position by Albus. My God what does it take ??? I am glad that Hermione is there and hopefully the rest of the intelligent group will see that Severus is on their side.
person Shay
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww man...come on it can't be Kingsley..........that would totally be sad......
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Loving it! :D