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for Saving your life

by lilmisblack

schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter again! :D Loving this story. :)
person Mari
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY an update ^_^ ohh poor poor hermione i hope she remembers soon.....
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I simply love this story. Excellent job!
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was enthralled with this story up until that last chapter. Being on my own emotional roller coaster after what JK put us through in the final book and the one I'm riding out in a fic of my own at the moment, I'm just not sure I can go on with this. Even if he does somehow manage to restore her memory to her and they end up happily ever after, or this is like eternal sunshine of the spotless mind and they keep coming back to each other despite his memory charms to her...I just cannot emotionally invest in this, it's too heart wrenching and I think in the last two weeks since the book came out, I've been more emotionally invested in these characters than I have with various members of my immediate family. You're incredibly talented, and your writing far exceeds standard expectations, however, I just cannot go through the tragic, tear-jerking sorrow that will be the next four or five chapters while you play out the remainder of this story, Hermione having forgotten everything, especially if you turn out to be as potentially sadistic as I am and have no intentions of restoring them to each other. Again, my compliments to you on the way you've characterized them both, you've played them well, the tensions are real, the stakes are high, and I've been reading and reading, exhausting my poor little eyeballs out over this, but finally they weep and no more shall I allow it until my own gut wrenching attempt at life post Deathly Hollows has solved itself, or JK apologizes for being the fantasy-wrecking bitch like hand of injustice that slammed down so mercilessly upon our hero's life, extinguishing it as if he were a mere bug. Your sex scenes are beautiful, though a bit repetative, however, there's only so many things you can do with those. I wish you the best of luck in your continuence, though would not mind in the least in finishing it, if the memory problem was restored/solved in the next chapter. Take no persuasions on my account as you are the author and it must play out as you see fit or as you've intended it, but a lil email if you do so change your mind, might indeed be nice. My congratulations and good luck.

~CryingCinderella
person serena black
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story was really good...I look foreward to reading your updates....
person nei
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder since Hermione doesn't remember being with Snape, will she resume her "relationship" with Ron? I would like to see how Snape react to it! hehe. Please update soon!
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor mione.. she has no clue and no one was to help her out that much ... please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person alli
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!! more! More!! MORE!!! that was so cool. but she has to remember that she's in love with him. right? eventualy?
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.