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Yay! They kissed! What is it with men and doing what they think is the "noble" thing to do? Loved the chapter and I can't wait for more!

Wicked fic!! loves it!!! Will be waitin for hte next chapter!!

I can't get enough of this story. Write, write, as fast as your hands can type!

hahahaha cliffie :D

its so interesting, i love it! :D

keep writing!

Yea! An early update...you made my night! Thank you, thank you for the Snape/Hermione kiss...I'm not sure how much more of the Draco thing I could stomach...and I LOVE

(oops, hit the wrong button)

I LOVE that Severus initiated the kiss!!

I like it. Please update soon.

@40 cool chapter, update soon, is draco thinking about going to the order for help? i kind of get that impression casue of how he seems hesitant to hurt hermione...anyways, awesome story.

*DB*

You're trying to please the reviewers too much but shitting out chapters as fast as you can.
You aren't moving the plot anywhere. The faster you write, the worse it becomes.
Can you please remind yourself that writing isn't about immediate satisfaction.
It's a long and drawn out process.
Just like you don't figure out who the killer is until the writer wants you to.

Get back on track
write a well written chapter
submit it to be beta'd
And then post it on Aff

And for GOD'S SAKES, MOVE THE PLOT FOWARD.
Enough with the hermione and severus teasers.

IF you have some kind of big bang you were saving for the end
now is a perfect time to write it.
Then you can move on to a new story.

Quality not quantity

So Severus slipped up and kissed Hermione. I hope this is the beginning of her realizing what Severus did and let him know she needs him as much as he needs her and to stop trying to be so negitive on the relationship. Hermione is the best thing that has happend to him in such a long time.