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for Saving your life

by lilmisblack

person Damiana
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eeeep! Evil cliffhanger indeed... Hermione is turning out to be quite the little minx. Kingley seems to have a thing for her and Draco also looks like he's got a bit of a crush (or is he a better actor than I ever expected him to be?)

As always, a fun read. Please keep it up!
person Avosa
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"evil cliffie" is right! eek, i can't believe it! i need to know what is going to happen! Please update soon, i love it!
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh nos, I bet is was Malfoy. He's back from the Giants. Can't wait till the next chapter!
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Crap-Dammit - what happens!??!
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! What a cliffhanger! I very much hope you have the next chapter out extremely soon. Loved the chapter!
person mari
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh you, you evil little person! a cliffie sigh.....oh well cant wait till the next chappie ^_~ i hope hermione remembers soon...the suspense is killing me ^_~ n-e-ways great chap update soon.....**whispers** but no pressure ^_~
person Julls
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much! It's realy complicate now. I am sure that it was Lucius at the end. I hope that drago wouldn't fail Harmione. I like fics where he turns from bad to good :). I hope that we will see more Severus in the next chapter.
kiss
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes a very evil cliffie but I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
person Fluffy
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Story is good, but your sex scenes just seem cut and pasted and just appear in almost every chaper with no real reason. It's all so similar. I skip them now. Less is more when done properly.