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for Saving your life

by lilmisblack

person jlclark
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! That was really excellent! I have been reading this non-stop for two days because I got so wrapped up in it that I could not stop. This is my first SS/HG fic and thanks to this story it will not be my last; I absolutely loved it. The plot was extremely original and clearly shows your writing ability as does your development of the characters; it was just right, you gave enough to paint a vivid picture of what everyone thought and yet did not go overbroad. Your scenes of intimacy between S/H were so incredibly hot and yet passionate; they were by far some of the best scenes I have ever read, especially in chapter 25! I hope you can post the epilogue soon as I am already dying to know the details of how their life ended up. Thanks for the excellent story and I look forward to reading more of your work:)
person avosa
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! they both lived...i was so stressed, worrying one of them would die. I can't wait to read the epiloge. :D I hope draco is ok too. :} Hee hee i know your pen name is "lil miss black" but for some reason whenever i read it i think "limp bisket"... no offense or anything lol, i just can't help it ;P. I loved your story, every bit of it. thanks for sticking to it and finishing it, you really should write your own books. Good luck with finals!
person erisah
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this. Beautiful work.
person nastygrl
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was such a long, satisfying chapter! Great job, weaving in and out of the battle, lots of action, but I didn't get lost in it. The ending was fantastic! I can't wait to read the next parts.

Excellent chapter!
person makaem
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous.
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!!! Very much looking forward to the epilogue!
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhh, chpt. 64 -- so good!
I can't wait for your epilogue!!!
person ismene5
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all I want to thank you for this wonderful amazing story. I really enjoyed it and I'm very sad its over.
It's a real treasure.

I was so afraid Severus or Hermione wouldn't survive the war.
Now I'm very happy about the ending.
This chapter was so exciting. You are a fantastic writer!
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?