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I was following this on TPP, and I just found out you had it here too. I couldn't resist reading the rest of the chapters, and I have to commend you in keeping the pacing and quality superb! I love the Draco twist, especially how he's with the "good guys" but he still saves Lucius. I look forward to seeing Hermione's reception in the Order after that scene with Severus, and how the Dark Lord will react to Bellatrix's death. Also it'd be interesting to see if Hermione could distract the boys from the Severus question by bringing up Draco and the cup.

God I just love this story I can't wait to read the rest.

well despite that it was a headache to you it was a great chapter! i do so love that they are so..heated...passionate...possive... irratated...anger with each other and so in love that they just both lash out at each other verbally and sexually, its so much fun to read!!! i do hope that you will have an other chapter up soon! i cant wait to see where you will take them-and us next. :)

You updated! It's been so long and I've been dying for an update this whole time! That was totally hot how they just lost control like that. And while I know it'll probably take a while, I really hope that they find a chance to talk again and things get sorted out. But she has every right in the world to be pissed as she is. But he needs to tell her the real reasons he did it. And I can't help but feel that his animosity towards Draco has more to do with jealousy then anything else. PLEASE update soon! I love this story so much I and I really miss it between updates! Can't wait to see what happens next!

It's a nice little complicated story that they are in. Severus is too jealous form Draco to see the truth. And also the things that he said during the meeting about Hermione are not palying in his favour. But Hermione is too stubborn. If he only could talk to her sincerly.
Graet chapter. It's all so complicate now.
What happened with the hoxcruxe?

Evil. You are evil. Evil incarnate, I'm most certain. I'd give you the title of Satan but that's often reserved for myself because I delay so damn long in updating my own works. How can you just leave us like that? The portkeying away was a nice touch, and the anger built up to UST was so predictable but so well deserved, and done effortlessly and yet in such a rich and colorful manner. Cheers on your good work, though I'll have you on your knees doing pennance for a month if you don't update immediately. You've got quite a mastery on Kingsley's voice. I find that he is hard to grip as a character, but you've given him a believable voice that you've stuck with. Excellent job on a minor's characterization, you've made him a key element to this story. And hooray for the appearance of the HOGWARTS school mediwitch at Headquarters. Silliness indeed. *Cracks whip* UPDATE!! *coughs*please*coughs*

Absolutely excellent chapter yet again! Finally some more yummy snape/hermione interaction. :P Delicious!

YAy! How could she just leave though?!?... i hope it all clears up soon, very good rollercoster i must admit. I hope your headache feels better! I can't wait to read the other story, just don't forget about this one, i'm totally hooked.

YAy! How could she just leave though?!?... i hope it all clears up soon, very good rollercoster i must admit. I hope your headache feels better! I can't wait to read the other story, just don't forget about this one, i'm totally hooked.

What a mess! Not your writing, just the situation. Your writing is very good and I look forward to more chapters :)