rate_review Reviews

What a great ending to an epic story. Loved it all. Waiting for your next one now!
Lu

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This in the end? I don't believe it. I can't believe it. I have been reading your story since... about August of 2007. This is the end. I feel like I've survived the war. I just feel numb and saddened by the loss. I--I shall reflect on this story often, and... seriously, write a story of your own, and e-mail me and I will buy your book. You are a fantastic writer and if you have a beta... they are fantastic too. Thank you for this! Thank you so much! I shall now get on the ball and hustle to add more to my story as well. You inspire me, lilmisblack. Thank you.

Wow. it over. :( what a great sorry.i truely loved it. I will be looking forward to the next sorry and can not wait.

A long and amazing journey ended. I'm actually sad to see this end. It was a wonderful story hun. I'm very glad you shared it with us. And it was worth all those long waits between updates! :)
Definitely going to be looking for future posts by you. You are a wonderful storyteller and I thoroughly enjoy reading your work.

Super fantastic!
Best story every, great finish :-)

Mmmm I read the first three chapters and I'm not quite sure what to think of it. It seems a bit weird, since you mostly tell the story and there are a lot of holes in it. Okay on to the next chapter!

That was a great, interesting, original and fun angsty story. Congratulations on completing it. And, thank you for sharing it with us. HG4eva

I have so enjoyed this story. I could really feel the emotion that Hermione was experiencing. It has been so frustrating to be in love with Snape. Thank you for having a happy ending. It really makes all the frustration and struggle worth it. Such is life.

Hey, wow, your fanfiction was fantastic!!
I have read a few dozens but yours is the best for sure!!

The way u describe the character's acting is so authentic compared to the books!
Wow - really - less writers achieve that around here alas.

Damn I liked 'your' Severus! Thats exactly how he is in the books, his comments,
his mimic, his all over behaviour. - I bet J.K. would be proud ;-)

(Though sometimes I wonder what she would think of us pple here at adultfanfiction
'using' her characters for those wicked stories here ;-) )

And I liked that you could build up a complex story around Snape and Hermione,
which let to a constant up and down of their relationship, tension rising and falling,
thats how it should be! It never went boring! You got it, you should be an author!!
The corruption and blackmails made one also sometimes unsure whether to trust a character
(like Draco) or not - really, really entertaining! I couldn't get away from reading!

I still havent read the seventh book to the end but I fear Severus will die, allthough for the side of light and fullfill the role a long misunderstood hero..... i will see, dont want him dead, lol - but if, then your story has a much better ending by far!

I'd love to read more SS/HG-fic of you! That would be great entertainment :D

I believe you are a native speaker, your English is perfect! Mine not, whish I could write like you.

If you like to answer my review, I added my e-mail-adress.

Greetings,
m3phista