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for When It's More Than A Dream Pt. 1

by jasmen

person Elric Maxwell
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you got MY attention! *grins* I hope you'll do more! EM
person Gidran Grey
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
for something so short it's so good. please please please!!! continue wrinting more??!!!!
person thalia
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
such a tease! Of course we want you to write more. Silly author. Hope the muse inspires you.
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh yeah!! Gimme more hot Snarry! Gots t'have my fix! Woot Woot!
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm. hawt snarry porn. i need more. cheers!
person Vittani
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good need more though, please update
person Tess
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good begining... but when can we have the rest? Better? Oh, I can't wait.
person Katharos
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate teasers, but I love HP/SS and I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you get those 5 reviews soon!
person Angel
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
here's one. I think it was to short not to mention the cheesy line "midnight lover" that could have been out of any eaqualy cheesy book och show. And this is a review... even if it's not a good one. Here's the good part: You shouldn't care if you get 5 reviews, wright for yourself! If YOU think it's good and wirght with passion then people will like it, if they don't then who cares right? Aslong as you feel proud then that's all that should matter!

person Alyra
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far great way to start off with some light and teasing smut cant wait to read more.