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Soooo can't wait for chapter 6! Well actually 5 but I'm keeping up with the number to mark my place. Silly I know. Will Harry tell Severus everything? And what will it matter? She needs to get those wounds looked at.

Slightly dark Harry is always good for teh world always needs changing :) Keep it up.

please update I love this story!!!! She should definitley be befriended be the twins....I dont Like Ginny, shes to creepy.....Snape should be a little hard on her in the begining but discovers the abuse and becomes a fatherly figure I love Snape!......ok let Ron Weasley take something from Hermoine since they didnt like each other.....Oh yea Harry has some kind of preminiton and knows Voldies coming back and starts to dive into her studies and kicks ass!!! You making Harry a girl then she should be a powerfull,smart,beautifull and absolutley amazing Harry!!! I love wittle Draco tooo!!!

>Harry should Befriend the Twins later.(after some Pranks going both ways)
>She should Befriend Ginny
>Snape (No idea)
>Ron Should take somthing of Harry's for the way she let him be made fun of before sorting.
>Harry should be given the cold shoulder
>Voldemort should be thought to be dead.

Thank's For the story THat's my Input and Glad you asked :)
btw : I love the Evil Overlord jokes

Sooo need chapter 5! I can't wait for more!

Wow! Great chapter. In response to your questions, I think Harry should befriend the twins, maybe Ginny, and definitely Neville. In flying class, I think Ron should take Neville's Remembrall. He could be teasing and making fun of Neville saying things like he's too much of a girly boy and that he's stupid and that he should have been sorted into Hufflepuff and not Gryffindor cause he's a big cowardly baby. (not really, but it could be Ron's attitude) I think that Harry should befriend people from other houses too. Maybe Hannah Abbot, Justin Finch-Fletchley, and Susan Bones (don't know any Ravenclaws in Harry's year). I think Snape should start to give Harry a hard time, but should find out about the abuse really soon. Maybe Ron or Dean or Seamus could trip her and Snape grabs her to keep her from falling. Then one of her many wounds could reopen and Snape could keep her after class to find out what's going on after he sees the blood. Then he could be her mentor/father-figure. Again, these are just ideas and you are in no way required to use them.

Soooo can't wait for 4!

Soooo can't wait for chapter 3! Slytherin was a half-blood? Way cool!

Thank you for answering my question.

its pretty good. love it actually. i shall be waiting for another chappy patiently.
i am glad she has friends.


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