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for A Living Secret ~ COMPLETED

by Ms_Figg

person Anon
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING STORYY!!!! i absolutely loved every little bit of it.
if you do a sequel i can immagine it will be just as good.
by the way- happy birthday!
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Complete???? Why is it complete???? MORE!!! :( More wooing and shagging!!! :( :( :(

Happy Birthday Ms. Figg!! As always, your story was fantastic. Bravo! But sequel, sequel, SEQUEL!!
person Kristic
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great ending to a great story! Job well done. And happy birthday Figgylicious!
person Domine
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Most excellent! I for one am hoping for a sequel. Happy Birthday oh queen of Sevmione! You have long been my favorite AFF author. I hope you never quit.

Much love and huggles,
Domine
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I truely believe Hermione has made Severus realize that yes she wants him and only him and they will be together forever.
person phistolemon
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome epilogue so far :D

I really liked the idea of them bathing, that was something new!
but the second part now.. wow! am glad you decided to let hermione open up
a little more, tell him her feelings.. and hell it was so sad in a way.
I was listening to beethoven's 'mondscheinsonate' (I dno if there's an english title,
just know the german one) and it kinda fitted most of the time.
the.. sadness/bitterness in hermione's wish to have severus pretend to love her,
just this one time.. the music was emphasizing that, it made my eyes go teary D:

wonderful.
I hope there'll be a future for them together :)
person Aragon
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for answering! I had not seen your earlier address of the age of consent-topic in the reviews: I have read the first few dozens until after the first chapter where the problem cropped up and when I didn't find a comment regarding this I posted myself, not wanting to slug through the full 200 reviews ^_^ and getting spoiled in the process re later chapters plot.

AFF seems to have eaten a few complimentary sentences in a different paragraph of my first review - I had just found your tale, was in the middle of reading and didn't want to spare time better kept reading further along ^_^ But it wasn't my intention to post a review only consisting of a correction, that seems a bit rude... Anyway, now that you've updated several chapters more I fear I'll keep it short again in favour of reading further ^_~ and just say that I enjoy your epic very much and am impressed by your skill with writing gripping plot (I know you mainly from your earlier steamy PWPs) and making something fresh and original from the usual genric Horcrux-hunting-scenarios.
person Ms_Figg
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Aragon :) I'm glad you enjoyed this fic. I don't know if you're aware of it, but I have revised Chapters 16, 18, 20,22,26 & 30 to be compliant with the established age of consent, because it was distracting readers...we can't have that can we? lol. Thank you for being supportive. ***
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter (they always are)! Next chapter will be wonderful, I am certain. :P
person amsev
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
re chapter 41: oooooh sequel time? Moldy Voldy appears to still be alive.
re Epilogue pt1: OHHHHH TEH HAWTNESS. That was so incredibly sexy when she washed him. whoohoo! Five stars outta five for that scene!