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Soooo need chapter 4!

Awe Harry is soo cute! Love It keep it up!!

I've been looking for this story and waiting for more! I'm sooo glad you're posting again! Need chapter 3!

Pls update i really want to see where this is gonna go!!

Hi, Great story so far. Can't wait to see how they will manage to go about with their plans.

Please up date soon!

Oh, there is a couple of missused words (similar sound but different meaning) in your fic, nothing big, just a bit anoying. You may want to ask someone (else - not you because you're too close and not me because my english is horrible) to look over your work for you.

It's little things like 'eyes fool of love' instead of 'eyes full of love' and 'loose him' instead of 'lose him'. Since english is not my first language (And I've done quite a few of those) I can tell it's only typos but the meaning of your sentence is greatly changed because of those.

Cheers.

Hi!
This loos like it could be a really good story, I'll look forward to eading the next chapter!
Keep up the good work!
//LoveGD

First off, this story sounds so great, secondly, I hope you continue. :D

Well, I personally enjoy the way it is going, although I'd would much rather that Dumbledore didn't find out for a while, um... And that is about it, I think it should continue this path for a little while, kind of like the calm before the storm, basically I personally thing you should make it seem rather smooth and when they are least excepting, slam them with some nasty drama. :D