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Poor Natalie. Smitten like nothing else and she anot do a thing about it. Severus, feeling the same, yet denied. All people of an evil father.

I like the slow, mellow shift in her intensity though. She has always been lurking really and now we start to see her become "shallow" in the sense that she takes what she will, the rest of the world be damned. I hope that is forshadowing to darker motives? Brilliant as always love, can't wait for more.

I didn't realise that Nickolas dissapeared, but now you really do have me wondering where he went and why he left. As for the flash back, do you mean you are going to give us the down and dirty of Natalie and Alexie? You and you evil cackles! You just love to keep us all guessing!
Sansa

He wants to touch the amulet, I am using Imperio now, he wants to touch the amulet! hahaha I wanna see what happens when he does. I can't beleive Snape of all people want to touch some unknown artifact though, LOL BUT I can see how his curiosity is starting to get the best of him, especially since he wants Natalie and doesn't truly understand the depth of their once connection.

haha i just saw your comment on another story about how I converted you!!!! LOL I suppose I should be proud? hahaha If you want read really good stuff, check Samayel. Always long, descriptive and emotional but very well written stuff :P

Ok, I hope you enjoy the Remus/Severus bit in the last chapter. :P I catered it to you and one other I talked about the story with, LOL

thank you!! dont know how to get this thing to show email so here is one for you...
tiny_monkey@hotmail.co.uk
whya do all men snore, even the sexy ones?

HOT! :) I still say this is just to yummy for words. *melts* Ok I am going to scrape myself off the floor and shower and go get fitted for my new contacts! LOL Then I can see properly again - we hope. :P

I can't wait for more!

NOOOO you cant leave me there! please Pittwitch can we have some more?
*pulls sad face*

So, I don't count, so I'm not saying anything! No, just kidding. You know I couldn't keep my mouth shut. Just how did the brothers pull that off? Was Nicholas involed in the abduction, or did he just horn in on it after the fact? Why does he want her to claim the twins? Hoping she can't make the anti venom in time for them, and they would be out of the way. I think I really don't like that one. He seems to have an evil streak to him. Just like Daddy. So what exactly will happen if Severus touches the neckless? She doesn't know he has the bracelet, so does that mean something? How long is it going to take before Severus guesses there is something more going on? Make Severus touch the necklace. They are going to get busy so, it could swing back around, or I'm sure he will be touching her back. I want to see what happens. Unless it is something that would hurt him. I was a little afraid at the beginning that we were at Natalie's wedding. I know she was wearing pink, and at Alexi's house, but it is the wizarding world where things are a little different. How long to the wedding? Won't Natalie be missed? Maybe her brothers can cover for her. Very imaginitive on the book subjects. I'm sure that book could be very helpful. I see you used my new favorite saying again too. All those other readers better review!

you know that's just evil, woman. I can't even OPEN AFF @ the hospital cause of the stupid child guard crap on the frigging computers. Else, I'd have reviewed more often!

YES i want more, darn it! more!!!!!! where is it going??

marti

ooooh, that's so evil! haha poor Natalie, so in love, yet she can't do a damn thing about it. Severus, I think he remembers more than he is letting on in this scene :) I can't stand Nicholas, he's just too "loving" if you know what I mean? I am looking foward to the juicy details!!!