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for After Party

by pittwitch

person misslala
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww great one, pitt. :) Glad things are working out. Severus waw very funny! :D He didn't seem very happy about being told what to do. LOL
person Marbil
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a lot bloodier than I expected, but much more satisfying than JKR's final battle. I hated the way she showed Snape no respect in DH, killing him in the most expedient way to get rid of him so that Harry got all the glory. I also hated the way she had Molly kill Bellatrix. I love that you let Neville off Bellatrix, he deserved the chance to avenge what she did to his parents.
person ccino49
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was some finish to the Dark Lord. I loved the gore, but more would have been good too. And she saved Harry from having to become a murderer. I'm still curious as to how she'll be now that her tattoo is fully coloured in. And she still has that hold over all who hold an amethyst. And I STILL don't know if her and Snape are actually married after that thing they said together before. That was a short chapter, does that mean the next one won't be long in coming?
Keep those fingers on the keyboard pitt.
ccino
person misslala
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fab! I'm glad the snake is dead! :) Poor Harry. (Will he and Draco hook up now.) *evil grin* (I'm only kidding, LOL)
person ccino49
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, 2 chapter. Sorry I've not r&r's for a while. What a rotten ending to ch 75, you cut the lemon. Thats really mean girl. Collars at midnight.
I love the battle, so Nats finaly taken in her dark side and her tattoo is coloured now. What will that eventually mean? I thought Maurice was killed several chapters ago, I'll have to go back and re-read. The binding thing with Snape and Nat, was that a marriage? And why then? Is it something to do with defeating Voldemort? Whats with the [01] [02] thingies?
You nearly finished writing ch 77? I hope so. Pleeeeeeze make sure ther's lots of lemons before this stories done.
You're doing great with this.
ccino
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shit dude thats a lot of chapters.
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You evil woman! To stop right there! GGGRRRRRRRR! Write quick!

Sansa
person misslala
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pitt, you left all your corrective notes in this chapter! :P It's a gret chapter, though! :) I like Harry taunting Voldemort.
person nefati
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
end of chapter 20_ YES!! i know where you gt that line from!!
person misslala
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
tease! :D More, please? Got to know what's going on in the rest of the world.