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for After Party

by pittwitch

person Marti
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yep. made my night. andrew likes this one too, says it's better than watching his 'movies'.....great writing. not squicked in the slightest. can't wait to see who else gets going during the contest, though.

marti
person ccino49
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey. You snuck this one in when I wasn't looking. You did a marvelous job though, beautifuly written. I still wanna know what's with Natatlie. When are we gonna find out? Hurry with the next one.
ccino
person Marti
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, glad I could help. /Andrew's finally conscious from his st. paddy's day celebrating with his dormmates, if you need any more ideas ;-)

schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about your bad week. Hope this one is going better. I don't need any more details on that chapter. There is a bit too much togetherness there for me. You did warn, but of course I still had to read it. I liked the title about the tent. It was clever. Maybe those 4 need to take a trip to Vegas.
Sansa
person ccino49
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh pitt you got it going there girl. Me thinks you took note and took action. Keep it coming. and keep in touch.
ccino
person Marti
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i want more details! i wanna know if it's as good as i remem......nvm;)....yeah, keep it up. we need more. this is the best threesome/moresome I'd read on here. usually it's just nasty and icky, written like a fifteen year old with a vivid imagination but no life experience had done it.

later

marti
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 31 - Well, I for one had to take a break and cool off the computer for a few minutes here. Smokin' hot chapter! Good job.
person Marti
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I want more, woman! I could write a believable threesome....not from expereience, really *inniocent look*.....but a fourway...mmmm.....but i wana see more, dammit!


marti
person ccino49
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now you got me wondering what you gonna write next. Hanging on edge of my seat in anticipation. Argh!
ccino ; D
person ccino49
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter but I'm not making any more suggestions. You squicked at my last lot. LOL : )
Your doing great as you are. Just keep going.
ccino