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Well, this was certainly a wild ride. Some interesting pairings, some surprising ones and a very satisfactory one. Your original characters were all very interesting, especially Natalie. The sex scenes were well done {{always an imporant thing!}}. The premise of this story was unique - I've never seen it done before at all -- and fits perfectly into cannon. Very good job here. I do hope you will write more stories, and possibly a follow-up to this one? :)

She's finaly admitted she feels something for Sna;pe, reckon his feelings run a bit deeper then affection though. So the females of the family are on her side, good. Hope they all gang up together and do something about wicked daddy-o. The mean b#####d. Have to wonder though, if dad wants her dead because she's female and can be 2become1, why didnt he kill her when she was born? Yeah, I know that sounds really callous but it would have been easier for him.
ccino

You know I'm still confused. Her dad wants her dead because it puts and end to the awful things they have to do to be the one in control, (I think) wouldn't that be a good thing? Or am I getting myself all mixed up here. If Natalies mark was coloured and she accepted the dark magic, couldn't she use it against her father? She is probably more powerful than him, seeing as she's got both animagusis and could be the one becomes two. Is she marries the ugly bugger in a civil ceremony, will she be able to divorce him without repercussions? Does the family rule stipulate she has to stay married to him? Why has Lucius suddenly turned horrible after she gave the best orgasm he's probably ever had. And who's at the door? and will she and Severus eventualy have babies. (wink)
ccino

So glad she told him everything that she could. Guess she doesn't hold a grudge against the malfoys. This chapter answered many questions. If she did have a child, providing she was the one that becomes two, wouldn't that break the curse so that no one had to fight to the death?
Sansa

Ch. 47 (and 46 for that matter too)- It is all a little mysterious with this 'thing' Natalie has with her brothers and her father. I hope it is explained soon, because I'm feeling quite confused here...

When we getting ch 47? You promised it would be last week an we still waiting. Come on pitt. get those fingers tip tapping.
ccino

If what is true? The mark real? Change? What is she going to change into? Is the mark only black if it were her father calling her? When two become one? You are rotten for leaving me with SO So many unanswered questions! Dog collar my ass, I am going to curse you with racing in the mud with 50 muddy whining kids Friday Saturday and Sunday for the rest of your natural born life!
Sansa

You think you got out of that curse, think again! You didn't really tell us anything else. All we know now, is that there was some kind of profecy with the one becomes two thing that could pertain to more than one of Natalie's family. What is an avenger? Is thah why Mom met her untimely death, because she was one? Is that why Daddy doesn't like Natalie, because she inherited something from her Mother? What is up with the twin thing? Why does Malfoy know about it and Severus doesn't? Is it because Malfoy is pure blood, and Severus isn't, so he doesn't have the same background to know that kind of thing? Where did Natalie go? Why is Moody/Crouch looking for her too, and not wanting Snape to go up to the tower? What exactly is the proficey, and who made it? OK, questions done. Just have to make you suffer a little.
Sansa

Sansa you got me thinking now. Okay, so Nolan and Noah are both animagusisises, or something like that. Ones a snake and ones an eagle. Natalie has both markings on her back so I suppose if the eagle changed colour, the other brother would come to her. Yes???? And why Slytherin colours????
Do the twins have a single marking each? and can Noah get on the island too? Was it her father calling her through the mark?
If I don't get answers, I'm gonna surpass Sansa for questions.
A very frustrated ccino

If Natalie can escape to the island, why is she agreeing to marry the toad? It is kind of ironic that she had her little sexcapade with Lucious, since he was on her fathers list of potential husbands. Can't wait to see what Snape's reaction will be.
Sansa