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for Pure Lust

by Melyn

schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man this was some brilliant shit! Whoo hooooooo! You have a real touch for one shot writing! I wish I could write one shot's like you! But I tend to turn them into multi chapter novels!...Congratulations great stuff!
person SiriuslyInLuv71
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! Snape is such an ass! omg... wow. LMAO!!!! Watch Harry get mad exicted...
person Debs
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant twist :) I love it ^_^
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do find the beginning a bit choppy and can't believe that Lily would actually like James to bring his friends round, but I must say wow as I read through it it is absolutely excellent. You should think about doing a chapter 2, if you do let me know.
person DAngel
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOhhh That was good. That was very good! You had me all the way up to Snape hiding behind the bookshelf...mischievious Snape... I never saw it coming. Who wouldn't want to shag Sirius...LOL Very Clever...
person Dove10
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That story was really clever and very good!

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