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schedule
February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. I love the way you write and the way you portray Draco. :3
Write more please.
Write more please.
schedule
February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wait, so I'm confused! Did they or didn't they sleep together? I don't think they did....cuz Harry just left the night of the party...but then he told everyone that they did! Hmmmm.....
schedule
February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 5!
schedule
February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are EVIL!!! I want more :D
Can't wait for an update
Can't wait for an update
schedule
January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you're going to have Draco use Muggle *anything*, you need to explain his change of attitude. His disdain for anything Muggle is well documented. And then to make it something as mundane as blue jeans and a wife-beater? Not in the least bit believable.
schedule
January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Readable, but you really need to pay more attention to how you word things. In just one 'for instance' out of several, you say, "...Ron nearly avoided catching fire." Did you really mean to say that Ron *didn't* avoid catching fire? One would have thought there'd be more of a hullabaloo over that.
schedule
January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
huh? don't leave it there! more! lol
schedule
January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What? Don't just leave it there, you evil person!:D can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule
January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Harry. But did he really or didn't he? Sarcasm can be a cover for the truth.... Good job on chappy 3!
schedule
January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo love this story! Need chapter 4!