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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You absolutly must write at least one more chapter! PLEASE?!?!?! This one was fantastic!
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February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FINISH THIS DAMN YOU!
Sorry, I love the story, but that's a horrible place to stop.
Please continue
=^-^=
Sorry, I love the story, but that's a horrible place to stop.
Please continue
=^-^=
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The voices of your characters are to die for! Each is so utterly distinctive and moves the story forward in the most liquid way. It's not just the sharpness of the dialogue - Snape's direct words, but Harry's inner voice and Snapes voice filtered to us through Harry that sweeps us off our feet and over the edge of the falls.
I absolutely love Harry's voice throughout the story:
~~"I hate you," Harry tries to say with all the appropriate force and proper feeling behind it. As he opens his mouth, somehow that very -proper- but tired old sentiment transfigures itself into something shiny and new, a heart-stopping, soul-felt, life-changing moan to be precise that he quickly presses (since it quite properly has nothing to do with him) as far away from himself as possible, right up against the lips of Severus Snape.
~~Harry is still angry of course but hasn't the slightest idea why now.
~~Snape has trampled all his thresholds. Snape is simply too intense a pleasure for one touch-starved young adult to bear gracefully.
~~It is blinding, this indescribably beautiful sensation. How is he supposed to continue to hold proper grudges against the man who is giving him this selflessly loving experience? Harry suspects he's going to have to find out. For now Harry prays that Snape never stops. Unfortunately, when it doesn't seem as though Snape ever intends to stop, Harry starts to feel weirdly guilty. Soon he just rolls a bit, away from the greatest pleasure of his young life to date.
Thank you for the gift of your stories. Please do continue to write, and hopefully share them with us!
I absolutely love Harry's voice throughout the story:
~~"I hate you," Harry tries to say with all the appropriate force and proper feeling behind it. As he opens his mouth, somehow that very -proper- but tired old sentiment transfigures itself into something shiny and new, a heart-stopping, soul-felt, life-changing moan to be precise that he quickly presses (since it quite properly has nothing to do with him) as far away from himself as possible, right up against the lips of Severus Snape.
~~Harry is still angry of course but hasn't the slightest idea why now.
~~Snape has trampled all his thresholds. Snape is simply too intense a pleasure for one touch-starved young adult to bear gracefully.
~~It is blinding, this indescribably beautiful sensation. How is he supposed to continue to hold proper grudges against the man who is giving him this selflessly loving experience? Harry suspects he's going to have to find out. For now Harry prays that Snape never stops. Unfortunately, when it doesn't seem as though Snape ever intends to stop, Harry starts to feel weirdly guilty. Soon he just rolls a bit, away from the greatest pleasure of his young life to date.
Thank you for the gift of your stories. Please do continue to write, and hopefully share them with us!
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was the best hate sex I've even seen! ;]
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good Lord..(fans self..)....PLEASE, stop torturing everybody and finish this!! Excellently written! I LOVE snarky Snape!
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Erotic is the only word I can think of right now to describe this. The way you described the foreplay gave it a classy touch but still dirty enough to be really kinky
Update soon
Update soon
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG>>>> that was awesome. this is the first time i have ever read a Harry/snape pairing and i must say that was damn right sexy....i love it. it was funny too... the bon appetit part... superb.
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
The story is fucking hot! Go on please!
Yours,
the waiting AI
The story is fucking hot! Go on please!
Yours,
the waiting AI
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT ::DROOL::
This has got to be one of the longest, best, seat-wetting smex scenes I have ever had the pleasure [wiggles eyebrows] of reading. Don't keep us hanging too long. I hate getting muscle cramps. -_^
This has got to be one of the longest, best, seat-wetting smex scenes I have ever had the pleasure [wiggles eyebrows] of reading. Don't keep us hanging too long. I hate getting muscle cramps. -_^
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"He hadn't even wanted that sock until now!" I think you're right on the money with some of the psychology going on here. This is more experimental than I expected. Liked the part about the past imperfect and possessive and the tense present- very cool. Actually the first kiss was just awesome.