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by MaiStar68

person Addie
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah sweet!! please continue i'm interested to how this develops
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very well written, i am looking forward to the next chapter. I love your characterisation of Snape, so many make him "nice" and well...he may not be a "bad guy" but he is certainly not nice
person LiT
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to see more.... if the rest is anything like the start than i'm sure it shall be good. thanks for sharing.
person amyordinary
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more! I hope Sev takes good care of him!
person l'etje
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is good beginning keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hope you continue with the story!