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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man.. i hope she breaks is off with ron soon ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too much boring stuff is happening. You are telling us things, which we know already. The pace is okay, but the happening stuff is just not exciting enough. So far the story is lacking too much good stuff to be interesting for me. I will read the next 2 or 3 chapters and will see, what I will do afterwards.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ron is gay and should be shunned, killed, maimed. Kill him. Kill him. Make him fuck the ferret. Make him impotent. I hope that he never even saw Hermione naked. There is hope so far. She could have told him, that she would do it only after her wedding, even if she already fucked Harry.
Did Harry do her anal? Has he fucked her in her little, precious ass. I hope so. I hope that she loved it. She loved it to get fucked by Harry, I bet. Yeah.
Fucking Ron. Kill Ron. A nice accident on work. Let him get killed by a running train. Fucking weasels. They all suck. Ginny sue sucks. Fred and George are only pains in the neck. Percy sucks. Bill is a fucking half werewolf and he gets to fuck Fleur. Molly sucks, because she is so fucking annoying. Charlie is the best, because he is almost always never there. I hope they will all die in your story. I hate the fucking redheads. Suckers. Kill them all. Arthur got what he deserved. Fucking weasels. Kill them all.
Greetings
Ron is gay
Did Harry do her anal? Has he fucked her in her little, precious ass. I hope so. I hope that she loved it. She loved it to get fucked by Harry, I bet. Yeah.
Fucking Ron. Kill Ron. A nice accident on work. Let him get killed by a running train. Fucking weasels. They all suck. Ginny sue sucks. Fred and George are only pains in the neck. Percy sucks. Bill is a fucking half werewolf and he gets to fuck Fleur. Molly sucks, because she is so fucking annoying. Charlie is the best, because he is almost always never there. I hope they will all die in your story. I hate the fucking redheads. Suckers. Kill them all. Arthur got what he deserved. Fucking weasels. Kill them all.
Greetings
Ron is gay
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's sad, but at least everything's out in the open now. Im happy for how well Ron took it. He is a grown man in your story, not an overgrown boy and I like that.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. A story so full of clich
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow ron took that better then i thought .... i hope mione goes to harry and tells him she loves him ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a great story, good plot, well written and I love how you portray the feeling of the characters, you have talent!!!
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
go on, the chapters r good and update soon
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is great... keep it up...
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't like the fact that Hermione is fucking Ron. I hate it. And as we are in the H/HR category, it is my right to hate it. Ron fucking Hermione sucks. So this story sucks too! And you suck, because you are deleting negative reviews, even when it was not a flame. So this time, it is a flame. If you can't take negative criticism, you shouldn't write fanfics! What a stupid idiot. Every time you are deleting my review I will post it two times again.