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for Practice to Deceive

by SailorSol

person Marti
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
" 'I' before 'E' EXCEPT AFTER 'C' 'Deceive', not 'Decieve' .....otherwise alright. hope to hear more from you
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad for the update. Very interesting story. Liked the matching patronus's. Looking forward to reading more.
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very non traditional, and original. I like it. Are you going to update?